One last thing again don’t compare yourself to these other books in this app where almost everyday the most popular searches are s*x storys and other disgusting things like that

I didn’t notice but this seems pretty popular, 800k views for a story that’s one month old seems pretty good, I’m pretty sure but I’m not on here unless checking for story updates

Never done before idea or at least I’ve never seen, hyped for timeskip and good writing. Need I say more? (Also the first person I’ve made a review about after 500+ hours I reading)

Ps hoping for update soon^_^

(I never wrote a comment or a review but here I go) I really do hope that you don’t discontinue this story because it’s actually pretty good, not many grammar issues and I can understand what is going on unlike some other stories on here… But you shouldn’t compare yourself to these other “famous” or “popular” stories, these popular stories or at least most of the ones I read and drop(around 1m views) always end up dissapointing me, like trash MCs and things like that, but here I don’t really see that. Not sure if this means a lot but last time I check I had like 500+ hours on here, but I don’t mainly read here, I also read on things like wattpad(most fanfic quality there also bad but few good ones) and i mainly read on ficfiction.net where many of the stories are high quality and I can say your story belongs in that website. Overall if you write future stories with ideas like these I would read them, I hope you are able to read this and get the encouragement to write more and continue this story ^_^