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So true.

*life expectancy wasn’t super old back then

Great book so far, love the progression doesn’t feel too rushed but building off what another comment mentioned he’s in his teens now and the life expectancy wasn’t supper old back so I’m curious how thing will turn out. Also is the MC going to remain the the Roman Empire for the future or will he go to any other places like Northern Africa or the Middle East.

How disappointing. Got exited for nothing thought the author heard our pleas and made a change but I guess not.

This is my third time editing this review. I thought the author fixed the Charls/Shire name mix up but no fix in sight. How lazy can you be not to read you own AI made content, the minimum you could do as an “author” (not sure how much of this is AI but definitely a good portion) is proof read you work. Such a shame becouse this starts out as a good story but I can feel it falling off quality wise in the 400s.

Good fix (I went back and changed my review where I mentioned this issue).

Did a chapter get skipped?

Is it just public knowledge that he has a system now?

Don’t drop plz

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