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RuthFish1mthCommentedLearning was achieved on this day 🤣
"We will do it ourselves this time." Sylvia cut Mika off.- RuthFish1mthCommented
this is confusing to read ngl. The flow is going everywhere and it seems things jump around. If I were you, I would build up a plot point (event / arc 1), expand on it, then add in future plot points as foreshadowing (events 2,34...) while still focusing on the initial plot (event /arc 1) point you're expanding on.
Ch 38 The Turning Point [3]{Edited} - RuthFish2mthCommented
I first read this as "in a sugary lab". I'm like, is this candy land? I'm tired.
In a Surgery Lab... - RuthFish2mthReplied to zqteoCh 429 147. Nesting Dolls Together
- RuthFish3mthCommented
I transcended.
"Because then it'd be a foot." - RuthFish4mthCommented
he's 12.
'Interesting kid.' Her eyes lingered on Azzy for a couple of seconds before she deactivated the effect. - RuthFish4mthCommented
or an incredibly short elliptical orbit
The sun would have to be orbiting the planet! - RuthFish5mthCommented
I didnt realize that the author's comment could have that much text. Didn't even know you could tap to expand it till now. Thanks and keep up the great work!
//Author's warning regarding the doubts/worries I'm starting to see in the comments: Go and check out the author's notes cuz I don't want to spam it here. It's a message on the longer side but should dispel most of your worries//detailRiches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!Fantasy · MotivatedSloth - RuthFish9mthCommented
I wish readers would stop telling the authors how to write. They are doing amazing.
"Goddammit!" - RuthFish9mthCommented
Maidenless
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Ah yes, about 200 of these potatoes worth of iron. Anything but the metric system.
"Oh, that's close to half a Kilogram, so you need about a hundred Kilograms?" - RuthFish9mthCommented
Toga?
The clothes I wore, no, robe. Was a pale blue... dress? I have no idea what they call these, it looked like a bathrobe only it was made of silk. - RuthFish10mthCommented
Finally, a Chad MC who sticks to his guns. I approve.
"Fuck you." - RuthFish10mthReplied to MrsLeeMauSue
This one officer!
Half an hour later however, Xiao Lin reached the entrance of the hotel where the merchant group was staying. Upon turning around, he smiled bitterly when he saw that the little girl had been following him, though she did so while deliberately keeping a certain distance. - RuthFish10mthCommented
literally two minds fighting for third place.
The snobby blonde went back to her friend group with a much better-behaved Goblin while Wolfe tried not to laugh. They were both idiots, and he wondered which one would win the battle of wits. - RuthFish10mthCommented
username checks out.
#Wetgirl: So handsome… I am already wet… - RuthFish1yrCommented
9-1-1, I'd like to report a murder.
"Isn't five minutes a bit too much? I know a third-year student who can only last three minutes…" - RuthFish1yrCommented
desist
As for the princess, she was a short girl with straight, chestnut-coloured, medium-length hair. She had a baby face and looked like the kind whose facial expressions change constantly. - RuthFish1yrCommented
second word is apostles I think.
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