Pikka
Someone who dreams to be a real writer.
of reading
2406
Read books
Badges
4Moments
14
Pikka9mthCommentedNo common sense whatsoever, I like her!
"Guess you can just borrow my spare swimsuit then."- Pikka9mthCommented
I think he can blame his teacher here, obviously he should have picked someone more outgoing
Afterwards he returned to his desk to immediately plop his face right onto the table. Their first encounter couldn't have possibly gone any worse and already his confidence in keeping this club afloat was already shattered. If he couldn't have a normal conversation with this strange girl, then how was he expected to help her? - Pikka9mthCommented
even I am almost shorter than her...
I would assume she was about 180cm tall. A girl taller than me was talking to me, and I felt an odd pressure for some reason. And yet her voice was devoid of any confidence. - Pikka9mthReplied to dmntt
thank you! but is this really it?
All my thoughts and ideas suddenly rebooted. Before I realized it, I was already looking at Ayase-san's back as she walked away. She was wearing a one-shoulder top worthy of the heat, along with blue shorts. She's got such high hips, almost like a model. Ah, she's even wearing sneakers today, maybe to match her current outfit. As she walked away with light steps, the door to the store opened and closed. - Pikka9mthCommented
I don't know man, never bothered with cooking either xd
Spoiler alert: It ended in failure. Well, not quite. It's not strictly about success or failure. I overestimated my own ability, which was practically nonexistent. Every single term in the recipe was abstruse to me. The hell is cake flour? Is that any different from wheat flour? Season to taste? What kind of process is that? Get the hot plate ready? I don't even know how you're supposed to heat a plate. Boil it for five to ten minutes? How imprecise can you possibly be? How can you even tell when it's done? - Pikka9mthCommented
ironic considering we're now gonna see it in anime
"There's no way we'd do that. There's no way anybody would enjoy watching that." Ayase-san said with no hesitation, and I nodded. - Pikka1yrCommented
Random readers thought, but I think I prefer just one ending.
Maybe that's just my writing style or maybe I just feel too bad for fictional characters and the readers who've grown to love a lot of them. So I just want to pose the question of what you, the audience, would prefer. - Pikka1yrCommented
It seemed so suspicious I never even remembered that was the reason she stated.
"I've just been thinking about when I used to be friends with him." She answered. "I know that I told you that him being friends with someone else… That it was the reason he changed… But that was a lie." - Pikka1yrCommented
I'm getting the odd feeling Iruka was actually a bad bad friend.
"Yeah…" He agreed, but also knew she hadn't gotten the full picture. The way Masahito spoke to him afterwards felt odd. It wasn't like he enjoyed being a bully and it sounded more like he believed he had been doing the pair a favor. He brought up things between them Hakuta believed he had kept only to himself. Was there something more to that previous friendship falling out that even Iruka hadn't realized? Or perhaps, she hadn't been willing to admit to herself what the true problem was. - Pikka1yrPosted
I give it a 3/5 so far, writing quality is good and I have no issues with the story. But then there is the characters... our mc is very strange about wanting certain things from certain periods, obsesses over appearance, and somehow acts like a genius while being swayed by lust. Lambert is portrayed as weak but somehow still got so much support? I don't mind the other characters so far. Then we get to the meat and potatoes of why I'm dropping this for now. Linde. Now, I'm only 38 chapters in, so feel free to spoil. But I can not accept the fact that his apparent "slave" would create trouble with his actual fiancee. I'd even like it better if it turned out she's been faking subservience to him. But please, I need some way to ease the pain on my brain. Oh yeah, stability of updates, no clue. I give it full score.
- Pikka1yrCommented
Hah, it does seem like the adults here are not the most perceptive.
"When I was younger, I wish I got better advice than what I got from every adult I talked to." He answered, not properly addressing what Hakuta had said in a way that was satisfying. "Anyway, I imagine you don't want to waste more time talking to me, but does that mean you're going after her?" - Pikka1yrCommented
da plot thickens
"Old friend…?" It was now that he realized who this person truly was. This was the boy that Iruka had told him about before. The guy whom she grew up with as childhood friends, only for him to abandon her when they were in junior high. If this was the case, then what was he doing here? - Pikka1yrPosted
Less of a review more just random comments (technically my first review though) My first thought is that this feels exactly like something that would be actually an anime. mc is someone who overall could be related with, his thoughts are simple and normal for someone who is not "in" with the social world. It does fall in to some romcom cliches, like how unlucky the mc is and he has to solve everything himself. Other characters come to conclusions too quickly. I still have around 20 chapters to get caught up but this is what I think so far