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Arail11dCommentedCould Harry have joined a higher year lvl for history?
In the cozy Ravenclaw common room, Harry retreated to his own space and breezed through the History of Magic assignment. Having aced his OWLs in the subject not long ago, the task was a piece of cake for him. Once done, he dedicated some time to write letters to Sirius, Emma, and Susan, sharing the news of his sorting into Ravenclaw and his experiences on his first day at Hogwarts. With the letters sealed and ready, he then made his way to the Owlery.- Arail15dPosted
This novel reminds me of bad Chinese/ Korean translated novels, that expect your to agree with the narrative and not question all the problems. The author 100% has potential, what could improve this novel is realistic human responses. At the moment it has protagonist halo syndrome: where the MC is always the best, no matter how bad the mindset he is always right, things seem to always work out for the MC and he collects lucky encounters out of no-where. I did like the system, how lottery power ideas came from anime characters. Also how novel followed a timeline that could match with the marvel universe.
- Arail2mthCommented
makes sense now
Although Tom already knew that this would all end, he still wanted to try, and his real goal was the room where Severus found the diadem. - Arail2mthCommented
how can the 2nd sole split know what he did in the future? shouldn't it only know up to Hogwarts time?
And during this journey, he hid one of his Horcruxes, the locket of Salazar Slytherin in Albania, and created another one. It was the diadem of Ravenclaw, the location of which he learned from the daughter of the founder of Hogwarts, Helena Ravenclaw, having charmed her, with his mask of a pleasant and charming student. - Arail2mthCommented
Found it, last chapter posted on Aug 2022, only 6 chapters. Author last seen on SpaceBattles yesterday 9/02/2024, this is a real thing requiring to be check after COVID, so there is still hope for the Epilogue. YAY
My original fiction, [Villain: Remastered], is also available on platforms like: SpaceBattles, SufficientVelocity, RoyalRoad, Patre0n(public), and it will be soon on QuestionableQuesting, and Scribblehub as well... so it's upto you guys where you want to follow it. - Arail2mthCommented
Anyone know if the epilogue has been posted? What is the new name?
Phew. . . A Magical Journey has finally come to an end. Well, there will be an Epilogue volume, but that will be released slowly and will be directly released to the public— the Epilogue volume will come out slowly, like over a year maybe, and it will cover the future life of Quinn and the people around him. I will make the Epilogue as satisfactory as possible, full of great moments with no sadness or tragedy (maybe a little bit, who knows). - Arail2mthCommented
cats catch spiders, dolores umbridge has multiple cat photos....this shouldn't have worked
"Now, let's plant it into a non-descriptive corner." - Arail3mthCommented
wish he mention being excited to see what the kraken would do when a ship enters it territory........just to freak the students out.
"If we put this information together, I can say with reasonable certainty that Durmstrang is in Svalbard, which is a Norwegian archipelago in the Arctic Ocean. Everything fits. The archipelago was discovered the same century the school was founded. Moreover, for centuries it had been part of the Russian Empire. That is, until the 1920s, when it became Norway's. The population is partially Norwegian and partially Russian, which explains the cultural hints in the symbols of school. And the lands there— there are mountains and lakes! Also, these lands are almost not populated by muggles, which makes it a great place to hide a school of magic." - Arail3mthCommented
Quinn acting like her dad / husband
"I'll go tell him," said Luna before skipping back to the house towards her father's study. - Arail3mthCommented
nice
Human echolocation was the human ability to actively create sound and detect objects in their environment by sensing the echoes those objects made. People trained to orient with echolocation could interpret the sound waves reflected by nearby objects and accurately identify their location and size. - Arail3mthCommented
echolocation, to find the next tests gate-way.
The light orbs that he had released immediately went dull as they moved away from Quinn. A couple feet away and Quinn could barely see any light. And the problem wasn't in the spell; they were properly functioning. It was just that the water inside Tehom's Delight interfered with the propagation of light. - Arail3mthCommented
water routes makes sense, thank you for adding this.
Transfiguring an object underneath while riding it using levitation also didn't work. The transfigured material would glow red and immediately vanish, and Quinn would drop into the water. - Arail3mthCommented
Why not enter the centre from the "sky"? work smart not hard.
Train tracks were the source of Quinn's inspiration; train track shifters, to be exact. A train track switch was a mechanical installation that enabled railway trains to be guided from one track to another, such as at a railway junction or where a spur or siding branches off. - Arail3mthPosted
This is a fun read, like the updated photo shows more what the novel is about. Enjoy that the transmigrated MC is in a game type of world and crushing it, kinda like a hording apocalypse novel, with city building aspect. The secret realm other world jump within the transmigrated world was a surprise, didn't expect this to happen so close to the beginning of the novel. I can see some elements from novel that is similar to manga Pick Me Up, Infinite Gacha (which is also a great manga). But the novel is more wholesome and MC has control over the city building. I would like to read more of these types of novels, if anyone has idea would love to know. Spent 700 coins currently on this novel, so this should tell you its definitely worth the read.
detailThe Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely lifeFantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling - Arail4mthCommented
So the MC eats the body and trap the spirit?....of food.
"Ji Ji Ji." The ginseng, not taller than two feet, circled around Li Chunhua's legs before climbing over her thighs. She wanted to tug it off, but the little guy wouldn't budge and just kept muttering, Ji ji ji.detailThe Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely lifeFantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling - Arail4mthCommented
so he reincarnated too
"After awhile crocodile." His small figure along with his mom's tall one dissapears from my vision and I suddenly feel lonely and cold in the desolate play room. I sigh dejectedly. - Arail4mthCommented
so the god created zombie's ......for a good reason...and that somehow justifiable, cool cool good to know gods can do whatever to humans
The spell she casted onto the man and woman was somehow contagious causing all of the men and women to catch it. Humans in this world are bad people by nature so I personally think she was doing more good than bad. The humans were getting out of control, their actions more gruesome and beastlike. - Arail4mthCommented
Meaning you cant trust anyone not even the security you create for your city...so many contradictions
This was the survival rule that Zhao Feng had accumulated over the last 20 years of the apocalypse!