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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
    Alladin_Larma_78512mth
    Commented

    Thx for the chapter. Please update more for the little guys.

    Ch 338 Seraphim
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    Custom Made Demon King
    Video Games · Dark Old Demon
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Posted

    We can all agree for those who have read the whole book that the author just started tripping when the god the MC had was killed off. But, the other part was actually gold! If the author would review and start from there, I think he would have a very interesting book.

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    A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Commented

    I can't understand what is going on. The Grammar is so bad.

    Ch 5 Monk Tang Wrangled with The Emperor Tang
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    The Invincible Monk Tang
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Commented

    We little guys want more chapters.

    Ch 336 Ritual! Invade the Gate of Heaven
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    Custom Made Demon King
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Commented

    I was just reading the book offline and now I can't see what happened next! That's so unfair to me.

    Ch -1 Reminder
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    Relife System: The Unholy Mage
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Dude, with an IQ of more than three hundred, even if you are a transmigrated, taking to your parents will never be that easy. You will be a drilling mess because one single thought will be branched out to so many that you will take time to sort them out. A single look at a lamp and you will be disecting it, thinking about its advantages and disadvantages. A look at a book and soon you will be thinking about death. A look at the sky and you will be thinking about how terrifying the body masses out there are to our Earth. You will be going through so many formulas and whatnot you will not even know how much time had passed. You might even became mentally impaired because of the many conclusions you will be putting down. So this MC, he is just trash. Stop sullying the name of the people with so much IQ.

    Izuku seeing her was about to reject, but he felt a chill on his spine and seeing his mother, who practically had an Oni mask, behind her he quickly accepted.
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    The Most Powerful Quirkless (Completed Story).
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Commented

    It is quite hard to know that Izuku had another quirk instead of One For All, that is the reason why his life spiralled to the point where he got it from All Might. So, it would have been more better if the quirk was given to another character because now it just looks like you are doctoring things so that he can have One For All.

    Ch 1 Quirkless Or Not? RE:W
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    My Hero Academia: Ajin Gamer
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Commented

    This is simply bullshit. Just another way...I guess it goes to my trash books.

    Ch 78 Chapter 74: Killing the Dragon
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    Divinity: Against the Godly System
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Commented

    The way those stats have been assigned doesn't make sense. He gets 2 stats per level and now he is level 10. If you give all the sstats o one park and include the starter he would have at most forty five. But now he has like 105 in the strength perk. How is that possible?

    Ch 62 Opinion Poll: D
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    Divinity: Against the Godly System
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Commented

    Chai is an English name meaning tea in Swahili. Now you know.

    Our protagonist was enjoying his pizza with Chai Tea (a healthy tea made of unknown stuff). He was also eating a cooked elderly lobster. Then he had honey custard as a dessert.
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    Overpowered Soul Transmigrate In Apocalypse
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Commented

    why the hell do you use this for like every time you start a fight or breakthrough? It is getting old.

      Explosion!
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    Bank of the Universe
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Commented

    Aaaaand it just went to shit

    Ch 12 Interlude: The best girl
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    The Hammer Effect
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
    Alladin_Larma_78512mth
    Replied to Grass_Cutter

    It has become almost a norm for every MC in all fanfiction to be horn dogs. I will join you by throwing water balloons while he is sleeping.

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    Second Chance: Summon System
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
    Alladin_Larma_78512mth
    Commented

    basically Konoha's attack dog.

    The 3th Hokage had high hopes for the boy, despite his mysterious origins.
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    Konohagakure's Team 0
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Commented

    why the hell would this be in breaking news? I mean, are they that desparate for news?

    Breaking News!! Superman just threw a robbers car into the air for no reason and almost destroyed Lex Corp.
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    I'm not OP, I'm just Lucky(DCEU)
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Commented

    it has become a bit tiresome to read for we already know about the movie. It almost smells like desperation now with you going ahead and writing more.

    Ch 16 Davida
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    Omnitrix in Marvel
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
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    Commented

    man, this is gold. Better than all the Ben 10 fanfiction I have read so far.

    Ch 4 Hydra on tail
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    Omnitrix in Marvel
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
    Alladin_Larma_78512mth
    Replied to Alladin_Larma_7851

    There are existences out there that might make him a little weak, like maybe try to harvest his powers. There are cultivation world's and they might try to break into new universes and if they can that means they are powerful. Just spitballing here.

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    I Became Alien X & Trolled everyone
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
    Alladin_Larma_78512mth
    Commented

    Ace just became his yes man

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    One Piece: Finally Free
    Anime & Comics · TheEnlightenedSage
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  • Alladin_Larma_7851
    Alladin_Larma_78512mth
    Commented

    I really don't get why you and most of other authors just include things that are not in the anime. But thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 26 Chapter 26
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    The Might Of A True Uchiha
    Anime & Comics · SomeSpookyGuy
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