Joe_Thornton

came into this with great expectations as there is alot of potential to this story. biggest issue is the mc chooses what to say in a conversation and it takes 2 chapters of irrelevant "omg look a squirrel" before he can even speak

slicing a rift into the veil of life and death to summon souls of warriors fallen on that tower floor or whatever field he is in like on planet in tower or dungeon.

why didn't he kill the horse for a mount? zombie fight scared them away? to stressed to realize he could?

daoist*

wtf is a daoisi seed no I can't guess how it got there cuz I'm not a cultivator and have no clue what is going on. we are reading your written words not your mind. some understanding would be nice

super excited for this. the original is not only one of my favorite novels but also the one who got me reading instead of watching anime

I'm still in the early part and the story and characters are pretty good so far. only issue is chapters are way to short especially when asking for payment per chapter.

did giving the zombie a name make the author forget its level? if ah da is still level five then that would mean he's still a wild zombie who has not been synthesized and should not be controlled through the system.

this whole bit is literally stolen straight from super gene ... only thing different is game and character names LOL come on man be a little more original at least change the situation a little bit

I tried so hard to keep going into this but the main characters personality is just too back and forth. everything is set up to be a great novel but in the end the MC just ruins it and I had to stop around chapter 111 surprised I even made it that far. just goes to show how much I wanted it to be good