Laura_Ramsey_4518

The character names are always messed up.

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Update please. I paid a lot to read it

When are we getting more? Such a good book!

Really confusing here. Pretty sure you started talking about Yuen or whatever her name is and mixed in R? Try to keep it straight please

Please don’t tell me Su Ran and Ye are somehow related! I will lose my mind. Just when Ye saw the jade pendant and recognized it had me worried

Scarlet I love that this is your book. I didn’t even notice that! I am currently also reading Mamas princess is daddy’s beloved, AGAIN! I love your writing!

Spelling is terrible and pronouns are awful! Very surprising with a scarlet Shine book. Her others have been right on.

OH MY GOD! She is meeting Chloe again? I’m done. This is terrible put together

What’s more annoying g is how many time these chapters skip parts of the story. They were just having dinner I. A restaurant and going to her home and next the pull up at a hot pit restaurant. Author READ YOUR WORK PLEASE. I love the characters and what the story could be but it is getting harder to read. And Ivy is DEAD Please stop calling her Damian’s sister