Writing quality : little to no errors, some typos but that’s all. Really easy to read, and it gets better as the novel progresses. Update stability : 16 ch a week. Story development : Still a lot of potential, the beginning is a bit rushed and has a lot of plot holes, but they get addressed as the story evolves and the author finds a way to incorporate them to his story as trials or self-improvement to the mc as the story unfolds. the later arc contains little to no plot holes. Character design : hummmmm not much to say as I dont really care about this aspect in a story. But I can say that there is a lot of character growth and they get better as the story continues. World background : Not a lot of details regarding the whole of the universe, but the individual worlds or planes get a in-depth description as they are explored by the mc and crew. Overall I really like this novel as we can see the growth of the author as the story progresses. Make raisin-bending great again 🍇

Can we just switch aina with anya

I dropped the story 5 times because of aina, but yet im still here…

I need more but I’m broke...

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

Its an enjoyable reading experience, light but with enough action. The MC is funny, not dense, likeable and is not the hot-headed type of MC who wants to fight everyone for looking at him the wrong way.

This book could have a lot of potential, but Its just too poorly executed what a waste of a good idea... You can still enjoy the first two chapters tho!

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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