I paid for a copy of a chapter. I want a refund. I'm disappointed I waited for this chapter .

lol, kinda like the matrix. if your mind believes then your body reacts.

slight is better. I appreciate flavor. don't need ****.

go figure, emo shadow.

It's a fun read with an easy pace. The main character is relatable and his development is reasonable. I'm looking forward to future chapters. Keep up the good work.