LazyKhris
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LazyKhris1mthCommentedCh 50 Chapter 49- LazyKhris1mthCommentedCh 45 Chapter 45
- LazyKhris1mthCommentedCh 203 Chapter 203: Car-Nage-I-Val (3)
- LazyKhris1yrCommentedCh 7 CHAPTER 8 A New Down
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That was totally unnecessary...
"So, Sis Ms. SHARON MAE DISNEY will you walk with me on this dangerous and Questionable long road which will have many problems, but I can promise you it will be enjoyable and I will always keep you happy," I said while pressuring her name. - LazyKhris1yrReplied to Shivam_Singh
No one will know, trust the novel logic...
"Well done Sofia now I want you to contact Harvard University or MIT to see if I can get admission to them I think I should complete my studies and please buy all the books that are needed to, so I can get into one of the universities. " - LazyKhris1yrCommented
Ohhh... It's related alright...
There are even skills that are not related to entertainment like some sex skills some shooting fighting skills which will be very useful in my journey every man's dream making my own heram. - LazyKhris1yrReplied to GodOfGreedAs
INVRLied: I have Photographic Memory...
[welcome host I am the popularity system that will aid you in this long journey - LazyKhris1yrCommented
Okay, I may have not been reading properly. But how long has he been in a coma or in bed whatever. And he can already move?
"Can you please make me a good dinner and inform my sister that I woke up and please tell her that she doesn't tell anybody that I have woken and my waking up news should go outside of this house." - LazyKhris1yrReplied to RoryZaffre
Only kids make choices, men take them all!!
And never forget mc is a girl lover - LazyKhris1yrCommented
physically fine? Are you sure about him just waking up from a coma?
After checking I was physically fine a doctor asked me. - LazyKhris1yrReplied to Kabuk5
I think he is referring to the maid? I don't know why I have this thought but I am feeling weird just like this paragraph.
On the door of the room, I can see the maid biting her lips which look very sexy on her face but my mind was going somewhere familiar ‛where study material flow out one after another 'not now brain' she must have been shocked after I wake up, and from all those memories and the game like the screen I already figured out my situation already. - LazyKhris1yrReplied to SR_2027
aight. Too much information...
"While you are sleeping your father's legacy has been crumbling down has most of the families are trying to take everything from us please master wake up we, I miss you I miss your beautiful smile your words your mischief behavior even if Madam is busy she still calls regularly to check on your condition while talking with Madam I can hear her sobs she misses you, Master. Now even doctors started to say you will never wake up, but I know that you will wake up and prove them wrong I know you can hear all this so please wake up master." As she says this tears in her eyes increase. - LazyKhris1yrPosted
Writing Quality: This is the best Haikyuu fanfiction that I have read—not convinced? Then send me one that you think surpasses this one. Stability of Updates: I don't have any idea, but the update is relatively stable from the previous chapters. There must be some inconvenience on the Author's side that's why there's no update for two days. Story Development: It is at the most appropriate pace. Not fast nor slow, exactly in that golden zone where it is just right. Character Design: The characters are not just some blank characters. Hinata's character development is really good. You would even look forward to his changes. The changes in his character are not abrupt that they would seem out of place. World Background: So far, it had talked about some places that were not mentioned early in the original. Like the NA, or even Shiratorizawa Academy. So this is a good sign that the novel will not blindly follow the original route, I hope because that would be very boring. Conclusion: I like how Hinata improved and how it was not just overnight. It took him months to reach where he is now. I love how he had not wasted the memories of Adult Hinata, and I am looking forward to seeing Ninja Shoyo soon. A really big fan of Haikyuu, hope that there will be more chapters. You deserve the 5 stars.