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Zephyr_Kingsley3dReplied to Chasing_DreamsI did drop the novel immediately after that comment. Your diction or word choice is quite concerning; terms like "omnipotent" or "ALL POWERFUL or can do anything" aren't really suitable for a human husband. Describing the mc's wife as "BEYOND HIS IMAGINATION" is a wrong statement. i think beyond his reach at that moment is the right words. - It's nothing personal and I'm not also convincing others to drop this novel because of some exaggerated words but if the comment section is available then I'm willing to express my opinion. that's all!
The goal was to make him the omnipotent husband. He took a deep breath and said, "Miss Han, can I talk to you in private?"Â- Zephyr_Kingsley4dCommented
he's a virgin so...
Instantly, Raze's eyes snapped open, and he sprung up. "Don't touch me!" Raze shouted loudly enough that the other kids in the neighboring rooms would've heard. - Zephyr_Kingsley4dCommented
beyond imagination? is your imagination that poor and low? what a pathetic imagination! tsk what a stupid line!
Han Lingshi nodded and the young man said, "Miss Han, even if it is just in the name, we are married. I know that you are a person that exist in a league beyond my imagination but if you do not mind, I would like to know you more. - Zephyr_Kingsley4dCommented
omnipotent? author is underestimating the meaning of this word! MC WILL BECOME IMPOTENT and not omni!
The goal was to make him the omnipotent husband. He took a deep breath and said, "Miss Han, can I talk to you in private?"Â - Zephyr_Kingsley4dCommented
nice advice mc BUT WHY DIDN'T YOU DIE IN THE FIRST CHAPTER? I REALLY WANTED TO K!LL YOU AND MAKE YOUR HYPOCRITES ATTITUDE STUFF INTO YOUR LUNGS!
Opening the door, Raze left just like that. - Zephyr_Kingsley4dCommented
and don't ever expose her to any of the 6-color rainbow flag's propagandas and deceptions!
After all, his treasure was a girl, and it was important to nurture her sense of gender identity from a young age so she wouldn't be at a disadvantage later on.detailStay Home Daddy: I Was Reborn After My Daughter Passed AwayUrban ¡ Little Atcha Who Doesnât Eat Spinach - Zephyr_Kingsley4dCommented
it's understandable if you made a mistake about MC'S name but you made a lot of them in just one chapter. sigh! effortless writing but have the guts to lock these chapters!
Granny Zhang asked curiously, "Did you like that coat?"detailStay Home Daddy: I Was Reborn After My Daughter Passed AwayUrban ¡ Little Atcha Who Doesnât Eat Spinach - Zephyr_Kingsley4dCommented
*whose
What child doesn't want new clothes?detailStay Home Daddy: I Was Reborn After My Daughter Passed AwayUrban ¡ Little Atcha Who Doesnât Eat Spinach - Zephyr_Kingsley5dCommented
go to the dragon empire! there you can see lot of hypocrites and condescending people. there's no freedom of speech there at all! everything is censored and the people there are all brainwashed puppet. their government is their god.
Instantly, a red light appeared on their tablets, one by one. The guards were startled and glanced at Lin Lee coldly; their polite tone changed to stern: "According to the Golden Eagle Empire Treaty, any human or demihuman race living in or outside the desert, if they trespass the empire, will be apprehended and their properties will be confiscated; they and their generation will become the property of the eagle empire; you are now under arrest; the empire has declared you a slave; all your belongings belong to the empire." - Zephyr_Kingsley5dCommented
Space, space This empty space Space, space This 'Cause only you could fill this empty space I wanna tell all my friends But I don't think they would understand It's something l've decided 'Cause only you could fill this empty space â by James Arthur
After locking the door, he silently invoked "Space."detailStay Home Daddy: I Was Reborn After My Daughter Passed AwayUrban ¡ Little Atcha Who Doesnât Eat Spinach - Zephyr_Kingsley5dCommented
sigh! 1 chapter for not having a small change!
"Still pretending! No small change? Forty yuan! That's half a month's wages! In your poor and pitiful house, has that become just small change?"detailStay Home Daddy: I Was Reborn After My Daughter Passed AwayUrban ¡ Little Atcha Who Doesnât Eat Spinach - Zephyr_Kingsley5dCommented
that 30 kgs is heavy for a woman!
Gu Chen hadn't bought much, probably around thirty kilograms; otherwise, he wouldn't have been able to carry it all back by himself.detailStay Home Daddy: I Was Reborn After My Daughter Passed AwayUrban ¡ Little Atcha Who Doesnât Eat Spinach - Zephyr_Kingsley8dCommented
I'd like to say "too much bs again! you could have showed her the money you have to make her believe you!" sigh! what a big disappointment! WELL, I JUST HAVE TO READ THE FREE CHAPTERS AND THEN FIND MY WAY TO THE EXIT!
Xiao Ming grabbed his keys and jacket, opened the door, and tried to muster a smile, "Be a good girl, go back to your mother's house tomorrow, don't make me worry. - Zephyr_Kingsley8dCommented
really?
"There's no need," Yun Shi Yu smiled. "I should actually thank Mr. Xiao. If it weren't for him, I wouldn't have known that my staff could be so duplicitous." - Zephyr_Kingsley8dCommented
mc is spouting too much bs here and there! you could have prevented all of it! what a dumb mc!
Otherwise, I'll make you realize that compared to me, your husband who killed his father-in-law will seem like an angel!" - Zephyr_Kingsley8dReplied to Ireallylikereading
the mc is smart so he let go of his hate to feel peace and look the other perspective which is to understand that those nurses are also human who can feel frustrations due to the repetitive of difficult and dirty job.
After looking at the service feedback file, he opened it, checked the date, marked all good, and in the end, wrote positive comments about those nurses, hoping to leave a good mark in their lives. 'At least it's a compensation, for the inconvenience i cause them.' - Zephyr_Kingsley11dCommented
the mc is pretentious! in that kind of atmosphere, mc should have cheered his team showing a slight enthusiasm to lighten the mood and to show his carefree manner while preparing to control the situation.
As for him, he still maintained an air of indifference while waiting for his next opponent. - Zephyr_Kingsley11dCommented
nice line there author-san!
"Heaven doesn't like people defying its rules based on the Cultivation novels I have read in my past life. And maybe there is a heaven in this world as well, and it doesn't like what I am doing very much." - Zephyr_Kingsley12dCommented
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After a few seconds of 'deep thinking', he knew what he would be calling himself as his eyes lit up, and he declared, "Azmond! That will be my name!" - Zephyr_Kingsley12dReplied to HL005
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