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Super high potential, the author knows how to write and the plot is progressing well, other than story development which I gavw 4 stars, the rest is 5 for sure. 4 is just because I'm unsure about the MC's personality as of now, i'll update it if it changes

YES! the chakra system of naruto is just magic, work with it however u like

This fic has so much potential its nuts, I'm a sucker for good writing and realism and this has both. I worry that it might be a bit too slow as it is now but since we're at the start im still optimstic, the author also said that theyd speed it up later so im hopeful! Overall, 9.5/10 fic already.

TFTC!

Is this dropped?

I never even comment but ppl like u r so annoying

Ooo those are some interesting ideas you brought up. As a hint, I'll remind you of chapter two when he was notified "[Similar precedent(s) found… applying patch…]" when the other two systems were incompatible with his soul, this should narrow down the possibilities. Cal being a bit of an idiot is a plot point but he will for sure start to uncover more secrets about the system, as of chapter 12 it has only been about 3 days since he had been put into his new body, soon he will understand it's features in much greater detail. Thanks for your comment, I'll definitely take that last point of Cal's curiousity towards the system into consideration for future chapters :)

Obligatory shameless author review here! I'm very excited to present this novel, I've loved novels of the same genre and after lots of writing practice, I felt the desire to create my own story featuring elements that I enjoy from the same genre. I have confidence in both the quality of my writing as well as my creativity, writing is a hobby that I take seriously and do so alongside my professional responsibilities. This story is a passion project and I sincerely hope that all who read it, enjoy their time doing so. If you have any criticisms or other comments in reference to my writing please let me know and I will take them into consideration. I hope you all enjoy the read!

I'm reworking all the chapters from 1 until the chapter where I will start to change things, I have started the rework. The quality of my writing has improved from when I started chicken's rise and I'll have to update all of it to a standard that I think is good. Again, thank you so much for your interest Larry, you're comment has given me more motivation to keep going and work on Chicken's Rise alongside Skeletons Struggle.

Oh my god Larry I'm sorry it slipped my mind, I ran into issues with Chickens rise and am planning on deleting some chapters so I can re-do the last 10 or so chapters. Skeleton's struggle in my opinion has a lot more potential at this point in time but I will def go back to chickens rise soon, I can't promise a day but I can't create more chapters until I re-work the story.