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Ember? Who's Ember?
took off her bag not back.
Quench their thirst.
Weepinbell? What happened to Gloom?
What did Ashlyn ask?
Where did Machoke go?
Where did Ashlyn go?
Make himself as small as possible before doing anything is my guess
Area #4? I thought it was Area #3.
Doesn't Meowth mean Raichu?
What about Leaf Stone?
St. Surge? I thought it was Lt. Surge.
I'd go for both if I could.
What about the Cleffa?
Great story. I like it a lot. It would be great if you continue the story. I would like to read what happens next. Whatever you decide to do will be fine. I'll be a little sad if you decide to stop now but I'm glad you wrote the story up to this point.