OMFG this was AMAZING I loved loved loved it. I love the ship,I loved the story line , there's nothing to NOT love about this story I would LOVE to see more chaptets of this and im totally going to read more of this as the way the words were written was so moving Really it was.

This was short yet SOOOO GOOD the story line was super good and the ending really makes you think like really THINK its that good I totally im going to read again I PROMISE.

this w-was j-just amazing 👏👏👏 I couldn't keep my eyes from moving I just read and read and read and READ I just couldn't stop I'll totally read again a 100%.

THIS WAS SO FRICKING GOOD this story had me on my feet and the whole story was j-just......words can not explain how good it was I would LOVE TO SEE MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS like...... LOVE.

OMG this story was SO AWESOME the story line was SO GOOD the ending tho........ that really put me in the feels I would totally read again but I would bring some tissues😢😢

this story was absolutely ASTOUNDING. they story itself was devastating the plot was so sad and it makes you want to cry..... like a whole lake! It makes you feel like your IN the story watching everything thats happening and i-it just makes you feel something.

this story was super good and just keep me at me feet it was like a whole movie in one chapter and the whole story plot was absolutely AMAZING would totally read again 10/10.

THIS WAS EPIC!!! not only was this a Apple and Raven ship this was an amazing story. the way this was written again was AMAZING I felt like I was in the story it was THAT GOOD!!!

this story was super good the way it was written was memorizing......I've never seen someone write like this it was AMAZING. I would have never imagined Raven and Darling together but know its my favorite ship EVER.

this story was entertaining funny and in all out AMAZING this was a super nice Eah fan fic and I just LOVED it. I would TOTALLY love to see way more chapters of this story and its amazing story line.

this story was Extremely HILARIOUS the whole story line was so good. I laughed every five seconds I mean I couldn't stop really I couldn't.

this was chapter.......words can not describe. there was drama upon drama and some twist took time to even realize!! this chapter was AMAZING and that aallI got to say.

As a Eah fan I thought this book was amazingly good. i'm not a writer myself but the way this chapter was written I moved me really it did. do make more chapters of the book series and keep at it!!