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Craziest thing I'm about to say but this is the greatest start to a novel I have ever seen since Lord Of Annihilation now it's up to author to not mess this up . Recommendations: No Romance , No Harem , Keep him at this pace or 1 step slower , Don't force a person and. situation on him that makes him have to come and save and care about another person , finally bring out his full character you haven't made the readers aware if he is Evil Good or Neutral . Create a scene that let's us have a grasp of whether this character aligns with our interests. Like me I love evil characters now good novels like this I'll sacrifice and still read even if he is good I won't like it but wont have a choice cause I'm so interested. Again those were recommendations keep on doing what you are doing and people will keep on reading. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Hey but look I think it's more gonna be a physcopath mc where he kills people like nothing and doesn't care about subordinate which i love but hey i was actually happy I mean see the bright side i think olivia is not gonna be useless she'll get trained and to me be like the woman in overlord forgot her name I was slightly thinking they would be left but There's appeal I mean Imagine The soulless witch which by the way I think is biggest indicator she won't be a leech imagine tho her just blindly following his orders regardless of anyone to me she'll dedicate her life she is a meat shield and if he took Reyna and alex then I could see why you should drop it but take a chance if you wanna see a totally evil mc that don't have no love or care for anyone but himself then I think it's this. I hope this convinced you.
I have seen this situation before and while I might not be the most equipped to give advice I still will if you know the Author HolyJoker he decided to go the patreon route and to me it benefitted him way better than if he set up the paywall simply cause people get annoyed having to use free passes and don't want to pay so he did patreon and he ended up with millions of people reading and that relied on having a great story which you have a good one no shade just saying the truth but anyway back on topic yeah he got millions of people to read cause they wanted the next chapter very bad me included so we pay for the patreon and there thousands of people on the patreon and guess what its 5$ a month x I think at least 5 thousand people x 12 months and you see how much money you would make hey and guess what I'm going to use this people would pay for it then copy it on another site and people would read that story like the original than the one on webnovel like infinte mana in the apocalypse i read it on another site and suddenly not as many people are interested and idk how the paywall works cause i have never used every book with a paywall i just decided to read on another site but yeah ik this was long but onr last thing are you seeking longterm finacial stability or a quick cash grab cause with patreon more people will start paying once they start getting jobs cause one thing authors fail to realize is their age group and most lightnovels and webnovels age groups are 12-21 and most around 14 and 16 so its your choice in the end but to me at least that feeling you got was right .