THIS IS DEREGATORY. >:< #gavemetrauma #cancelled #freegrannyinnit #oldisgold #oldieisneverbaldie #basicbaldy

Didnt understand ples expkain.

OMG i 100% agree.

im bored this was my last resort worst than wattpad, would not recommend, gave me trama.

GOOD NAME jk

i LOVE THE USE OF RHETORICAL QUESTIONS

wELL DONE YOU ARE SPECIAL

good use of your childs innocence oxmorons to the simile of the motif

nice vocab and good use of similes ~ your English teacher

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The picture is kinda nice

well done bro

You have improved

Too be honest the book needs a lot more improvement, but it was enjoyable i liked it and i hope u continue to create more chapters as the books story is rather unique for me, a perfect story truly is the perfect words, Ps: A better sypnosis would do it

try making more paragraphs to make ur story seem longer and not so fast to finish so it can leave a lasting effect on the reader

good use of imagery there

Hmmm, nice, nice i like it

Newbie, defo a newbie

I LIKE THIS MANAS its new LOVE IT

eh maby