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I should point out it's 3 stars because this type of story isn't my favorite, I prefer things more emotionally captivating but you don't have to appeal to everyon :P, I still loved it
Animak has really outdone himself on this one, it's just such a fun time with all the worldbuilding, and I appreciate the random references from time to time. This is just a bunch of friends having fun, and I couldn't be more for it .
Good development of ideas, a time skip might be in order and there are a few spelling errors, but then again, I would love a wholesome slice of life story, can't wait to see more and love what you've done so far. :D
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this is cool lol, very nice
An all around great story, almost no pointless exposition, it's especially good if you listen to the narration and the podcast, it's a wonderful story and while you might not get some of the jokes, it's definitely still worth a read even if you don't listen to the podcast. Also every joke lands perfectly, the world could be a bit more fleshed out, the story development has been nothing but wonderful, the writing quality is just great, and you know your doing something right when a real fan only has 4 criticisms.
Indeed men of culture he won't
Shinx you are a true man of culture and no other may say otherwise, from the path of explosions to respecting nux, you have achieved my full and utter respect, on a real note though, bakuretsu is a great song
Nux dude! I was not expecting that
MAC AND KOOOOOOR!!!