It ended at a bad time? the story ending is like a work in progress that gets dramatically cut, leaving unanswered questions and such. I'm not really sure if it really ended but it FEELS incomplete and maybe the author is taking a break, a lot break.. Overall, the story is really good and each character has its unique charm. The story plot is clear and understandable, there is no way a person can be mislead while reading this comic (unless they aren't able to grasp the context). I hope the story continues, and good job so far author, your story is very enjoyable.

the only thing I said was that Curtis isn't poor or homeless and that Bai wants to be rescued, you're having another conversation that has nothing to do with what I had said back then. anyways, Bai will still be scared of Curtis in the later chapters but for a hole other reason, both her males will be friendly with each other so rivalry in this chapters is a whatever past thing to me 👍

i wrote that a LOOOONNG time ago, I'm now enjoying (not really, I'm just a bookworm that HAS to finish the story) the story without giving a care of what happens. it's a story anyways so I think it's best that I enjoy the story as it goes, and I commented for exp back then. i don't specifically like any character anymore cause they are all disappointing, if not now, they will be later. i have my "oh this was a good character development" moments but they end up being jerks again later on so 🤷. Also answering for EXP 👁️👅👁️

They are finally looking at each other again, that's progress.. I guess 👁️👄👁️

am I the only one that actually enjoys their fights for her attention? that's the most action we've had in a long while and personally makes me laugh because of their silly act

novelhall.com lately, the website takes a little more time to update but the chapters are free to read there

well, Winston DID say he was going to take full responsibility for his actions. Even if both Parker and Curtis beat him up, Winston still won cause he got accepted, is the 2nd closest to Quinquin's heart (going by spousal mark placement), AND possibly got her pregnant.

he didn't teleport, he slithered his way to Quinquin and knocked down everything while at it 💀💀💀

Quinquin read his expression and automatically knew that the cub was happy to see her wear the skin he hunted for. the closer a person is to someone, the less words they need to understand each other cx.

Parker, get your cubs to fight to ensure their future and establish them as strong males from the start 👀👀👀👀 they haven't matured yet, but the cubs would be considered powerful beast men if they could beat beast men that have already matured

only 1? salt is considered a rich there. I thought that they would get at least 3 females from 20 jars, not only because salt is important for females, but because the salt was produced my beasts that are not merman. I thought that maybe the head of the tribe would think that the females would be better in a place in which the beast men have a lot of strength and knowledge.

I haven't stopped reading this story because I like how awkward Parker can be 💀💀💀💀💀

just be happy this man doesn't care if you get a little fat here and there. men now a days have unrealistic standards for every woman, they really expect us to look like the kardashians and kylie jenner. even so, Quinquin wants to have a good body shape so Parker should also try to praise her for being fit. it's hard to stay fit, specially when you're a foodie

I hate when that happens, but when one is extremely hungry, it does not matter

She has Curtis for "sea", the only thing Curtis can't do is provide an air bubble for her. 🤔 Either way, you're right, Quin only needs an air element avatar now

i'm aware of the History, but I'm glad you know that rape is wrong 👍, I personally did not like what you had said before about Quinquin "deserving it", that's just not acceptable. about Muir, Quinquin was starting to have feelings for Muir and had admitted that if she would have met him instead of Parker and Curtis, she would have easily fallen for him. Winston, however, knew that Quinquin didn't see him in that way. she can't string along someone that knows how the other person feels, and Winston knew how she felt. when Winston asked to be her protector, QQ was going to reject him but ended up accepting him after Curtis' answered for her. that's the reason I believe Quinquin didn't string Winston along, she has a naturally nice personality and Winston happen to fall for her more and more because of it. I do see where you're coming from though, so thanks for clarifying yourself

I'm good with what you said on the first part because Winston deserves to be with her, but no one ever, EVER, deserves to be raped. It's not Quinquin's fault that men fall in love too easily in that world, she can't change who she is. Winston has a loving character that we all looked forward to become her spouse, but that does not mean that Quinquin deserved to be raped. Yes, this has happened before but rape should never be normalized, even if it's normalized in this story, it's wrong. Winston had already said that he would accept any punishment because he knew he did wrong, a man admits his wrongdoings and accepted the consequences, a slap won't do him anything. He's a four stripped beastmen and he won't bleed or hurt as much as Quinquin has in that world because of a slap.

Parker got consent before mating with Quin, after constantly pestering her about it, but at least he had permission, right?🤔 It's not supposed to be normal, if we compare her experience to Rosa, Eudora, Belle, that have a lot of males wrapped around their pinky and are arrogant, Eve who is properly courted, and Molly immediately broke the spousal relationship with her rapist. What they all have in common is that they all have the upper hand and final decision in the relationship, but Quin doesn't and ends with the worst experiences ever because she lets her males decided for her

thank you 😊!!

it never really occured to me either, I just started to think about how Eudora was the prettiest female leopard, had a horrible personality, treated her males inhumanly, yet somehow was also the most desired female in the tribe, same goes for Rosa (tiger) and Bella(?) (peacock). however, as soon as Bai was shown in the picture, everyone started to fall for her because of how considerate and pretty she is. she somewhat disturb a balance. 🤔