Living_Otter
Just want to show the world what the small world that exist my head
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I could only write about the first chapter ,cause really, I had only read the first part. The world building seems intriguing, quite detailed and bountiful. Though I'm not sure about your ability to keep up the quality of the writing ,if you could then that will be nice. It's pretty good. The only downside is that your sentence are way to long. Put some fullstop in rather string down all of it in a sentence. I'm not sure if it's because the sentences are long, there's some parts I found to be hard to understand. But.. I thinks it's actually just wrong wording or sorts. Well I can't give you a rating on updating stability yet and or story development and character design but the writing all give a 4 and the world building a 5. I wish I could read more and give a more accurate review but it's too early to judge. Overall for now, a 4 from me. Keep it up
Was going for a comedic perspective
So thts how a viewer felt tlwhen they see this kind of unrealistic thing...
Why does everyone felt that MC is a moron or smtg
Barely understood properly what you just said
Boku no hero academia?
I'm not really into kuudere tho
Big pp
That's dedication right there
Fucking disastrous
"Can you mail the bat to me. Is that okay? - Living_Otter"
Whatever it is, saying that there's too much adjectives. But is it just me? I'm impressed with the use of adjectives, and choices of words? the power of editor or just the author?
im curious too