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Heathora_Keith3mthCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2 A Totally Normal Birthday Part 2- Heathora_Keith4mthPosted
- Heathora_Keith1yrCommented
A body can be dead for 5 days without decay problems , especially in cooler temperatures. There would not be the smell yet. Maybe smell from her deficating though after death.
The words spewing from his stepfather's mouth barely registered in Riftan's mind. He glanced at the dark corpse limp on the floor before whirling around to hurl. The putrid stench of decay in the room mixed with pungent bile. His stepfather helped him up as he gasped for air. - Heathora_Keith1yrCommented
Especially when you are trying to toughen up a boy in that harsh Era. Just be greatful its not like that where you grew up.
The older man flexed his biceps, huge from years of hammering, and shook his calloused fists. Riftan had once received a blow to the temple from one of those fists for talking back. He had spent the day throwing up. - Heathora_Keith1yrCommented
You guys act like this isn't normal. it's only recently that childabuse is not tolerated. Children would be beaten all the time and still are in countries
The older man flexed his biceps, huge from years of hammering, and shook his calloused fists. Riftan had once received a blow to the temple from one of those fists for talking back. He had spent the day throwing up. - Heathora_Keith1yrCommentedCh 195 Side Story Chapter 1
- Heathora_Keith2yrCommented
Where am I?*
"Where I'm I?" I inquired her. - Heathora_Keith2yrCommented
And here we go back to maps instead of mops....š¤¦āāļø
She slowly got up from the floor and standstill continuing to watch me; saying nothing; while she reaches for the map. - Heathora_Keith2yrCommented
goosebumps *
I suddenly felt one of my feet moved and then another; until I was standing behind her, so close that her dress brushed against my side; allowing my skin to be covered with goose pump. - Heathora_Keith2yrCommented
Mop is finally spelled right
And there I saw a red hair female within a long green dress; decorated with white flowers; hitting on the door wanting to get out; beside her, she had a silver bucket filled with water and a mop. - Heathora_Keith2yrCommented
Again, What!?! She was wearing a white frilly dress just a moment ago. How do you forget what you wrote in the same chapter?!
I huddled up against the wall, scared. As she questioned me; while my long, thick, curly, red hair dripped with water. And too my washed-out, blue dress she gave me. - Heathora_Keith2yrCommented
Umm. What?! You just said she was fit in the sentence before!! So which Is it?!?! Not very far in and already not making sense....
She had short gray hair and was short and fat. - Heathora_Keith2yrCommented
Well this description really makes me see how great it will continue to be....not! I will no longer read this Title. such a bogus chapter
It turns out that Luan had already used all of the Qi strength he had in his body and physical strength and was unable to resist the woman, and even when he tried to use it again, he would need more than a few minutes to recover, Luan and the woman ended up having "sex". - Heathora_Keith2yrReplied to Nosa_Dawod17
we just read that the female runs the show, and the male is the figure head. he goes to battle and deals with politics , the queen runs all the other important stuff. And usually is the case. hence the phrase, "happy wife, happy life!" š
Reth growled. "They expected that I would watch Lucine slay her, then mate Lucine, cementing her power over meāover even my past. It was a sinister move. Genius, if it had worked." - Heathora_Keith2yrReplied to weeelizabeth
LOL, YES WOMEN REALLY DO HOLD THE POWER!!! THE POWER OF THE TRIANGLE HOLDS ALL!!! In a normal, strong relationship a woman is the strong supporting base that keeps things together and manages the family. especially if ran by an alpha female. the author shows Reth is just puddy in Elia's hands. lol. That's the case when love is there. But we still run the show, it's just behind the scenes sometimes. :)
Reth growled. "They expected that I would watch Lucine slay her, then mate Lucine, cementing her power over meāover even my past. It was a sinister move. Genius, if it had worked." - Heathora_Keith2yrCommented
ok, 15/16 is when he lost it. that's logical. still what is his age now? 12 years plus 15/16 would be around 28, so Elia is 26? because she's 2 years younger than him. God that's along time to wait for a woman to give it up! š
"When we were, what, fifteen? Sixteen? Until then you'd had all those grand ideas about saving yourself for your mate, remember? Then one day it was like a flip just switched and you were suddenly game. I poked you about it for months, but you just said you changed your mind." - Heathora_Keith2yrCommented
that's because your sense of smell is turned off most of the time when you sleep.
Caves? They were going to caves? Of course they were going to cavesā¦ If it weren't for the bruises and smells, Elia would still have told herself this was a dream. But she didn't ever remember a dream that smelled quite soā¦ uniquely. - Heathora_Keith2yrCommentedCh 7 Challenges
- Heathora_Keith3yrCommented
Hehe, how does She like when he played her games!? Got her to spend time with him when she isn't interested. oh how the tables have turned little one!
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