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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_04191mth
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    it will be good to create fire with concept f ice start creating concept powers to counter light and darkness concept it will be good to have multiple concepts also like concept f jungle magic based on animagus or for particular element

    Ch 218 Chapter 218: Of Darkness and Death
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    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
    Book&Literature ¡ athass_prkr
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_04191mth
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    unique genre of magic like animal magic on the basis of patronus

    Ch 76 Clubs
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    Harry Potter: I'm James Potter.
    Book&Literature ¡ Nathe07
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_04191mth
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    try to add components of magic exploration like spirit body mind etc

    Ch 54 Chapter 54: “Meeting Sirius's Girlfriend”
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    Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
    Book&Literature ¡ TalesByJaz
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_04194mth
    Replied to NightRyder_19

    so here start development of flying thunder jutsu

    Portkeys and Apparition did not open portals to different locations. It didn't make sense that honestly mediocre wizards and witches could open portals in a fraction of a second with only Destination, Determination, and Deliberation. No, instantaneous travel was more like a giant system that the ministry operated. Whenever a person wanted to apparate, they would be using their wands as a beacon, which would also have the destination in mind, the system would open a portal there, as small as possible to not waste any energy, and the person would temporarily be transfigured into a slim form to go through before they're transfigured back. Everything is calculated by the system, the wizard or witch only had to call the beacon, similar to how the Knight Bus worked. Fawley didn't say who maintained the system or how it was powered, but Harry postulated that it was something the ministry would have to involve themselves in, and it was also probably powered by ley lines. The magic involved wouldn't work with anything else.
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    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
    Book&Literature ¡ athass_prkr
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_04194mth
    Replied to Filippo_Manzone

    seal him for some time till find the solution harry uzumaki

    Harry had woken up late once more, something that was becoming a trend in the last few weeks. He had been up all night in the Forbidden Section of the library, trying to find any magic that manipulated different dimensions, in a way that would help Harry actually defeat the madman hunting him down in a permanent manner. However, things weren't going well on that front. Sure, the Colt was a guarantee that things would go well on that front, but Harry didn't want to risk wasting a bullet on Sirius Black of all people, a normal wizard with above-average talent at best, who suffered an accident to turn him into the serial killer that he was now.
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    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
    Book&Literature ¡ athass_prkr
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_04194mth
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    1)setup a summoning jutsu contract with fluffy 2)animagus normal animal (white tiger because of ice magic)but develop magical abilities like pokemon attack3) animagus also help in development of further development of magic protect brain like all enanhcement a werewolf haveit will be great to have this things

    Ch 170 Chapter 170: Of Precious Findings
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    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
    Book&Literature ¡ athass_prkr
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_04195mth
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    I dont like volde

    Ch 82 82) Lord Voldemort has morals?
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    Transmigrated into Severus Snape with Golden Trio back in Time
    Book&Literature ¡ Jerry153
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_041910mth
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    remember previous life memories due tot much pressure

    Ch 3 Chapter 3. First Sin.
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    Marvel: The Half-Blood Prince.
    Anime & Comics ¡ Supes
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_041910mth
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    novel I don't like ch novel I like ch dropped😅

    Ch 5 Chapter 5
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    As Severus in Hogwarts
    Book&Literature ¡ anke18
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_041910mth
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    better if he is reincarnated person

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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_041910mth
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    start is good but no you have to bring system stuff

    Ch 10 Not All Random Omnipotent Being is On Your Side
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    DxD: Rise of the Cheatless Devil
    Anime & Comics ¡ EviLivE33
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_041911mth
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    it will be better without tm , talent mention in novel also money power less focused

    Ch 13 A Few Weeks Pass
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    I’m James from Team Rocket?
    Action ¡ Cndel
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_041911mth
    Commented

    only kid make choices 🤣🤣

    Ch 14 Poll
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    Pokemon: Reborn As A Dragon Tamer
    Anime & Comics ¡ ArifuretaForever
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_041911mth
    Commented

    just add whatever pokemon author wants phone get capture at least have some respect while getting pokemon also all region pokemon available rotom dex seriously

    Ch 23 CHAPTER 23 – POKEMON, THE MOVIE (PART FOUR) (Fixed)
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    Pokemon: A New Adventure Of Ash
    Anime & Comics ¡ Bloodnight
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_041911mth
    Commented

    this fic will be much better if you remove talent aspect

    Ch 11 Master Dojo and Battle?
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    I’m James from Team Rocket?
    Action ¡ Cndel
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_04191yr
    Commented

    better add self created magic

    Ch 27 Chapter 27
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    HP: MAGICAL LIFE
    Book&Literature ¡ Drkest
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_04191yr
    Commented

    man make him magical powerful also use knowledge of our dimension to do various things don't want him to hide powerful enough even take a walk no body can do anything

    Ch 15 Ch 6--Shopping—Part 3
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    Sirius Black (SI)
    Book&Literature ¡ LazyWizard
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_04191yr
    Commented

    what useless system

    Ch 10 Chp 10: Quirrell
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    Harry Potter: The Supreme Wizard
    Movies ¡ Northstar8888
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_04191yr
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    another Voldemort don't like dark stuff

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Transmigration
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    In Harry potter as Draco Malfoy
    Book&Literature ¡ Ambrose_Lestrange
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  • NoOne_0419
    NoOne_04191yr
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    spell creation pls

    Ch 2 Chapter2
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    Harry Potter SI
    Book&Literature ¡ Oden_490
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