Now this is such an amazing story. Fromt the power development to the world building and just everything. It takes you to so many fictional places but somehow it all fits and flows with the story. MIND you I really love this story. Buttttt I think I’m done with it. In the beginning I was able to ignore the incest things with the mom/moms/sisters etc… but now he has kids… with all of em…. And it’s just getting kinda pedo🤣don’t care how fictional they are or how abstract they minds are compared to ours reading things about a child wanting her dad is not it and that same dad being so obsessive that’s he wants them for himself when in reality he could be obsessive and allat without actually thinking he should have his children or mother etc even with him being the father of the race shit that should’ve made it even more of a no but for some reason for you it raised everything 1000% reading things about the moms and sister saying it’s incest and trying to get over it like it’s a villian turning good arc just left me with a taste in my mouth. Ion see how ppl can make it this far and keep goin and I usually having no qualms about shit I’m reading kids can die be burned etc but the kids wanting the dad and the dad ok wit it did it for me.

Yea understandable but bloodline doesn’t necessarily mean they’ll be this but I get it the story is actually very good. Some things the characters have done have made me mad lol but that’s why I love reading. I can say so far (not even chp 100) the story is keeping coming back for more even taking a break from other Webnovel and your other book I’ve been reading.

How didn’t he grab his sister while he was fighting that was a crazy take

Quick review barely read but ITS NOT WEREWOLVES THEY ARE LUPINS no full transformation so far issa myth.

No full transformation? So these are lupin creatures not werewolves 🤣 but I guess and ima guess and say since he’s immortal he gotta unlock his bloodline a different way than with death or near death experience.

Wonder if it’ll make a werewolf vampire hybrid down the road or sumn?

So what is he really in the system now since he cant be recreated or imagined that would mean hed have to have physically came

Atp stop writing such good stories if you just gonna hurt our hearts

Amazing chap love to see the aftermath

Ik the story is over and doesn’ really matter but I came from the Harvester and this is a pretty good book but I gotta say the Penance stare doesn’ work if the person doesn’t feel guiltt

Ima guess nd say it was from the moment he creased the sword plus the spirits he used to create her made her age

I wonder how his system is gonna operate are they gonna be mentally linked or something

It’s his friend that gave him advice in his life on earth

I don’ even remember what you’re talking about what chapter?t

Like just throw him in the back he needs no more page time

Man Amanirs personality or anything about him doesn’ fit with the story and it’s been like that since you got him nd it’s only getting worse the longer he stays t

Then the fact he acts so childish none of it says something Rex will deal with he don’ even think it’s somewhat cute 😭

Yea well he should have some kind of consequence it’s getting rather annoying that Amanir is doin this and Rex can’t do anything he should be able to hurt him or something it’s the lil things like this that’s ruining the book I used to jump every time a chapter came out

New chapter wya

Makes no sense for the OLDEST person and the one who CREATED the skills to be trapped by a skill sometimes I just think the author does stuff just to add to the story or do things he wished he would’v been done e