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Nice job mixing in the lore
Love everything about this book so far. Really hope you continue with the story and don’t drop it!
Good story with a good background and fresh take on the whole system genre. My only problem is the long internal monologues and unesscesary use of adjectives in conversations/descriptions. Just makes the writing feel kind of bloated. Hope the author can tighten up chapters and push the plot forward a bit faster. Also, there are too many reactions from others POV’s. Still enjoy it so far and hope it gets better
Time for the transcendental to show up
Good riddance
So basically, his future self influenced the past to create a new opening in the future? But if that’s the case, can’t Rowan’s 9th dimensional self (if he makes it) just travel back in time and wipe all the primordials out? Based on how powerful these beings are, and how much more power Rowan has, it would make sense. 🤷🏽♂️😂
I’m dead 😂