IM_stakuga

as the Hogwarts motto says "don't tickle the sleeping dragon".

why are they doing this at 4 years old? the gathering is the final test before a youngling can become a Padawan.

realistically it should have probably cost a bit more with alterations as $400 is the very bottom end of altered suits. I think $600 - $800 is a more reasonable price point.

bloody hell. I don't want to wait to see Dumbledore's kingdom crumble completely.

I wen I read this the voice in my head was that of macho man Randy Savage. so from now onwards the goose is forever going to sound like the macho man.

that's 4 words

Barriss is one of my favorite clone wars characters but I would like to see you add another different apprentice for Luminara as it is a cultureal thing that they train a Padawan of their own species so this only makes sense if Luminara is dead or has a different apprentice to train so Barriss was assigned to someone else. additionally Barriss should have already been Luminara's Padawan as Barriss was part of the arena battery and most likely the battles that followed. in this same thought if Luminara was hurt and thus needed a prolonged period to properly recover Barriss might be reassigned in such a situation.

I would like to say that this review is being posted at a point in which the story has only 4 chapters. I really like the writing so far and I don't mind the fast pacing in the initial stages but I do hope that things slow down a bit as it gets into the various battles missions and adventures that will happen throughout the conflict as this story could be great but I see too many star wars stories time skip too much and ruin things because of it. regardless my hopes are relatively high right now and I hope this one want get unceremoniously dropped like so many others.

I really like the idea of being a trained exorcist instead of being a random person it makes his strength more reason. which this said I think that his superiority to his peers needs to be something that is properly dealt with as he has potential and not being taught properly is something I would hate to see happen and would in my opinion greatly diminish his potential.