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Saek01yrCommentedCh 801 The Grand Finale, the God of Creation- Saek01yrReplied to thefirespeaks
it's not about a matter of preference if this novel is volume 1, it's pretty confusing it's feels so rush the introduction of your background is so thin you know you need a good introduction for reader's to get hooked in your novel volume 1 is the most important of all to see the outline of your story
"What?" Yang Lujia's eyes were wide when he heard this. "A peak master was actually implicated by my array formation?" He then thought of something, rubbing his chin with the other hand while holding his gourd of "wine". "Should I feel guilty, though? I'm not close to any of them anyway. Let him die." - Saek01yrReplied to thefirespeaks
i don't care if the mc kill without reason i read similar story like this but wondering why every chapters so hard to read can't mesh at all well good bye author hoping you improve more make an interesting new novel next time, for now gonna skip this
"What?" Yang Lujia's eyes were wide when he heard this. "A peak master was actually implicated by my array formation?" He then thought of something, rubbing his chin with the other hand while holding his gourd of "wine". "Should I feel guilty, though? I'm not close to any of them anyway. Let him die." - Saek01yrReplied to
well yeah why triggered did i hurt your ego though i just saying my opinion and what's more your english or grammar is indeed good but its hard to read like I'm forcing to read it .i read other novel and very interesting that i forgot how many chapter i read but this story it take too long for me too read every chapter not interesting at all. the way you portrait your mc how should i say this in english🤔that you can understand op character but a boring one at that and you're so sensitive can't you accept criticism maybe you're filipino? because some filipino author's here like 5star in review but can't accept 1 or 2star that's why they're not improving at all they can't accept it .the criticism or review or opinion of other reader's sometimes you all author's not too narrow minded or petty when someone stating their opinion just think how you all gonna improve your story to be likeable to all reader's not to go and reply no one ask you to force yourself to continue ?
"What?" Yang Lujia's eyes were wide when he heard this. "A peak master was actually implicated by my array formation?" He then thought of something, rubbing his chin with the other hand while holding his gourd of "wine". "Should I feel guilty, though? I'm not close to any of them anyway. Let him die." - Saek01yrCommentedCh 146 This Drama Touched Everyone in the Crew
- Saek03yrCommentedCh 826 Zhi Luo
- Saek03yrCommentedCh 78 Finally Dead
- Saek03yrCommented
hmm i thought something different here 😏😏😏
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what an awesome nerd
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