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TLW

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I have never written a story and finished it, but I love fantasy stories and I'm getting bored in quarantine so I'm gonna write a story in my free time. I hope you like my half thrown together story.

2020-06-10 JoinedUnited States
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    Replied to Brandon_1920

    Maybe, but not soon.

    Ch 31 Electro
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    Replied to aranu_bro

    I'm an idiot, thats all.

    The next project was all about clean energy. It was run by Professor John Davis, who taught at the community college before being swept up by Oscorp. Miles was interested in interning here. Mabey it's because he had electricity powers?' Xavier thought to himself. 
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    Replied to DaoistTVg5ve

    Might be too recognizable as a character, most they'll do is make another to experiment. Might I add that I don't like the shiny pants on Tom's version?

    It was almost like he was caught in a web of lights, forming colored portals inside of their gaps. In them, he could see Spider-man. All kinds of different iterations that he knew about from reading comics as a kid. Even ones from the movies, and Xavier could swear that he saw a Spider-Man with a white spider emblem. 
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    Replied to Ken87

    It's a part of a passive skill, next chapter I'll put the whole thing at the end.

    "Urgh. Why am I getting distracted so easily?." He dragged himself out of the wall. 'It won't happen again.' He promised himself.
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    Replied to Creativityiskey

    I'm kind of winging it with the new symbiote so I hope so too.

    Ch 24 Rhino
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    Replied to Lone_Philosopher

    I plan on ramping them up, but at this point they'll be somewhere around supersoldier in speed.

    Agi- Top speed- 120 Mph
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    Replied to Pitch_Black36

    Trying to find a balance between his strength in the comics and a good starting point. It's shakey.

    Ch 6 System
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    Btw here's the image that I like the best that depicts Xavier's suit. (Comments)
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    Replied to Creativityiskey

    My fault forgot to add it before I went out, Its the picture you got anyway.

    Btw here's the image that I like the best that depicts Xavier's suit. (Comments)
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    Replied to ImaginationGalaxy

    It's more of a mental stat, and he'll have to get more information from reading books and stuff.

    Please tell me if this makes sense for you. 😭
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    Replied to Creativityiskey

    I feel like that's not enough and I dont want to risk doing the math wrong.

    Ch 18 Big News
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    Replied to Nyxio

    The issue with the hideout has been solved in the newest chapter, we'll find out about Norman's activities in later chapters as far as that goes. The other issue with the strength will be fixed in tomorrow's chapter. I'll explain it as far as I can before it is posted, but the bite that they had gotten would enhance their bodies with its venom. That venom didn't take for whatever reason, instead creating pockets of venom spread throughout their bodies. Xavier creates something to rapidly accelerate this process. As far as adding others to the system, it will not accelerate their growth. In no way can they just buy powers from the system. There will be no extra help to the users of it. It is meant to be a sort of backbone to any who have it, allowing them to use the shop to buy things like blueprints and materials to build such things. There are other things like recovery items, but nothing overpowered. I plan on having the system there as a backbone for the group's growth in knowledge and skill. Again, there will be no drastic jump in strength other than maybe a few important missions that only the boys themselves can get. I will admit that the strength thing was a major misstep at first, but I plan to input it into the story. Oh and as far as the brother's interest in different topics, it's just that. Their interest. In layer chapters, it will be shown that both brothers are skilled in their brother's field, but they are gifted in their own because they enjoy working with it more. In the future, I will be more concise with story elements, but I was going to have them have the same powers anyway. The only reason I'm using the system in the first place is because it is fun to work with and around. I hope this answers some of your conserns

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    Replied to ImaginationGalaxy

    Not a whole lot- no more than five, but having five is unlikely.

    "Peter calm down, I doubt they would keep venomous spiders in an enclosure without a lock. Now we've got what we need, let's get back to the group before they start looking for us." While stuffing the spiders into his bag and running out of the room with Peter. Not noticing the spiders hitching a ride on them.
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    Replied to Jflash09

    Good idea!

    Any Ideas for their gadgets? Feel free to shoot your ideas at me
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    Replied to King_Kitkat

    Thanks! I'll end up using the train system again at some point, probably after Osborn is dealt with. I'll either choose to call it the Spider Den or Spider Web, whatever ends up sounding better.

    Ch 17 The Web?
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    Replied to Creativityiskey

    love this

    It sort of looks like the Kilomonger suit as far as the body highlights look like. Other than that it looks like a gothic version of Peter's suit. To any who would have wanted suits like the Iron Spider, Xavier currently has no need of the extra appendages. He's currently more worried about getting everything basic ready before jumping to the advanced stuff- Plus he'd have to build it himself and he currently can't do that.
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    Replied to Creativityiskey

    Ill look into it

    Ch 16 Progress
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    Replied to Novel_Manga_2624

    I have been looking into different sources, but I will admit I am not the most informed to the vast majority of the comics.

    Ch 4 Making Friends
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    I chose her because she was the most recognizable figure. She is NOT the most powerful person that's for sure, just the most likable. Her story will be explained on her position and how she had gotten so powerful. Dont wanna give anything else away so I hope that's enough.

    Suddenly the stand-off stopped, as it repelled down onto the floor. "Hello youngling, I am Madam Web." 
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    Replied to Lone_Philosopher

    Sooner or later I'll jump into explaining her role, but it's just a decent plot point to use.

    Suddenly the stand-off stopped, as it repelled down onto the floor. "Hello youngling, I am Madam Web." 
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