TLW
I have never written a story and finished it, but I love fantasy stories and I'm getting bored in quarantine so I'm gonna write a story in my free time. I hope you like my half thrown together story.
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I'm an idiot, thats all.
Might be too recognizable as a character, most they'll do is make another to experiment. Might I add that I don't like the shiny pants on Tom's version?
It's a part of a passive skill, next chapter I'll put the whole thing at the end.
I plan on ramping them up, but at this point they'll be somewhere around supersoldier in speed.
My fault forgot to add it before I went out, Its the picture you got anyway.
It's more of a mental stat, and he'll have to get more information from reading books and stuff.
The issue with the hideout has been solved in the newest chapter, we'll find out about Norman's activities in later chapters as far as that goes. The other issue with the strength will be fixed in tomorrow's chapter. I'll explain it as far as I can before it is posted, but the bite that they had gotten would enhance their bodies with its venom. That venom didn't take for whatever reason, instead creating pockets of venom spread throughout their bodies. Xavier creates something to rapidly accelerate this process. As far as adding others to the system, it will not accelerate their growth. In no way can they just buy powers from the system. There will be no extra help to the users of it. It is meant to be a sort of backbone to any who have it, allowing them to use the shop to buy things like blueprints and materials to build such things. There are other things like recovery items, but nothing overpowered. I plan on having the system there as a backbone for the group's growth in knowledge and skill. Again, there will be no drastic jump in strength other than maybe a few important missions that only the boys themselves can get. I will admit that the strength thing was a major misstep at first, but I plan to input it into the story. Oh and as far as the brother's interest in different topics, it's just that. Their interest. In layer chapters, it will be shown that both brothers are skilled in their brother's field, but they are gifted in their own because they enjoy working with it more. In the future, I will be more concise with story elements, but I was going to have them have the same powers anyway. The only reason I'm using the system in the first place is because it is fun to work with and around. I hope this answers some of your conserns
Not a whole lot- no more than five, but having five is unlikely.
Good idea!
love this
I chose her because she was the most recognizable figure. She is NOT the most powerful person that's for sure, just the most likable. Her story will be explained on her position and how she had gotten so powerful. Dont wanna give anything else away so I hope that's enough.
Sooner or later I'll jump into explaining her role, but it's just a decent plot point to use.