Interesting idea but will u actually finish it or will u cancel it early on

no harem

In my opinion it would have been better if he was older than the main cast since it doesn't make much sense for him to be called father at his age but still pretty good first chapter

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Have him become kokobiel after the great war then let him grow stronger it is the only way that it will make sense if you haven't already done so

4&5

1

will he he get with carol or will he stay single

Not sure is you mentioned this or not but will he get with anyone

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jiro

I would have to say jiro

2&3

I don't care that he is op or something but he can't just be killing people left and right and he I would like him to meet the ancient one once him or her (depending on the version you are doing)

if you are going to do a harem no more than 3 people Ignore this (#dddddddddddddddddddgfhdhdgdhrvdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhrbrbrbrbydhdhdhdhdhdhehrjejehedh;fgr)

you need to update this story at least every 2 days this is one of the best stories I have ever read and I can't wait for a new chapter great writing quality to

Are you going to update this I really like it its interesting if not can you put a chapter to say that you wont(rest is spam) hhhhhghghghgjf