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I am trying to write my novel. It's all now planned out, it's just the hard part left.

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    I originally started reading this novel about a year ago now and I can now finally say, I've finished the final chapter. All 1574 or whatever the final number is. And it is by far the best novel I have read. There are certain sections where you can tell that the translators either got incredibly tired while working on translating, or forgot to proofread a page or 2. This is I think around 10 pages in total. Out of 1500. So it is definitely not a common occurrence. This is all the say the quality is up to snuff. Now onto the story. In my opinion this story is split up into several acts. Around 5 or 6. Starting with su ping being isekai'd into a world with "magical astral beasts". The world is just like ours except now people can make contracts with these beasts to make them pets, and then they can fight alongside eachother for protection from other dangerous magical beasts. Now the entire story is set up in a leveling system, as you read up through the chapters you learn more about this world, and universe, and. Galaxy until eventually you know basically everything. And throughout this... "Ancestral land of chaos" there are always levels. If you however do not wish to spend a LARGE PORTION OF YOUR TIME reading about how everything exists in this world, you can always read the first act and see how you like it from there. The first act follows su ping as he grows in level from normal humans, unable to even contract an astral beasts into a pet, into a "legendary battle pet warrior" this is split up into a 10 level system to start out with. They're just called the numbers. "Tier 1 battle pet warrior" I think. It was a while ago. Up until we get to the legendary stage at the very end. Cmon now, this is a story about getting stronger and getting more pets, and MOST importantly the friends along the way. Literally. The most important. There have been numerous times in reading this that I have been bawling my eyes out, because the character writing is that good. I could genuinely feel emotions for these people and pets and their friendships. As for the world building... There's a lot. But due to the sheer scale of "learning everything about everything so there's a satisfying ending" in the first chapter there's not as much world building as you'd expect in a traditional novel. This doesn't really matter though, since the entire idea is just "our world and then pokè- "non copyrighted battle pets". Oh and also there's this thing called the galactic federation that exists and sort of like controls the entire galaxy, but that's act 2-4. Now onto the bad. There's not much in my opinion but I do have to say, it can get gory. Its like if the Pokémon peta game where it's just animal fighting, except they are entirely justified in their fighting. It has got some gory moments though. Like halfway through act 1 where the main character essentially uses telekinesis to physically explode a person. Because they were trying to kill his sister, and didn't know he was strong. To be honest it may not be seen as THAT gory as there's no real description, but it CERTAINLY painted a picture in my head. I could literally talk about this novel for upwards of 12 hours straight so I'm going to stop right here. But if you like action, Or overpowered main characters (but not too overpowered to get no tension), or if you're just looking for a thing to read for the next year, averaging about 50 chapters a month. Then start reading. Get to a part that feels satisfying for you, either after he saves the day the first time. Or whenever you want to stop. It's literally helped cure my depression.

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    Astral Pet Store
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