See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Thank you for the comment and concern! I’m not sure how it contradicts, but I will do my best to find and fix the issue. There’s a reason I’m moving stuff around, and it’s all for something big. Obviously I can’t spoil it, but please just wait and see. I still plan on incorporating most of what I had already written. Also, I think it’s always a good idea to have someone double check your writting, so I’ll take your advice on that. Again, thanks for the feedback. I always welcome and appreciate it!

Doing good, just had the right idea, but no direction for it. I finally found that direction, and I’m starting to work on the book again. I’m planning on releasing the first 15 revised chapters on Saturday, so be ready for that.

Thanks! It took a little bit to figure out what I wanted to do, but better late than never!

I think so, yeah. I will be posting chapters in the future, but I’ve needed to take some time off. I’m hoping to get back to it within the next month or so, but I’m not sure how often I will be posting even after that. However, I will be continuing the book, so stay tuned!

Haha, sorry. I’m not the best at naming things, so I hope you’ll have patience with me😅

Thank you for the concern tho!

Yeah, I’m doing fine. Just trying to think what to write next. I’ve got absolutely terrible writters block, but I’ve almost got a full chapter ready for you guys. I’ll release it in the next few days

Thanks, I’ll make sure to keep that in mind!

Lol, a little but its fine

It’s a drink made by alchemists that quickens the bodies mana regeneration. Think of it as a stimulant. Sorry for not explaining it earlier, I’ll make sure to add a description to the auxilary chapter

Yeah, I felt that way too!

Lol, I know the saying, but also trying to emphasize that different worlds can be slightly different, whether that be in animals, plants, or sayings. Thank you for the feedback tho! It gave me an interesting idea!

Thanks for letting me know! I’ll make sure to fix that as soln as I can!

Thank you for reading the chapter! I’ll try to keep the good ones coming!

Hi! Author supporting his own work here! This is the first book I’ve ever posted onto something, so any feedback is welcome and needed. Thank you!