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The story itself is super interesting and I like it but after the free chapters the story gets so hard to read. The grammar and paragraphs are awkward. It suddenly gets confusing from the flip flopping of pronouns for the characters. I'm not sure if it's just translation errors or mistakes. I probably pick it back up if it gets fixed.
Your writing is really great imo! I can't stop reading when I start. the flow of the sentences are great. I hope your classes go well!
I know there are only a few chapters at the point I'm writing this review but.. The story seems super interesting and I look forward to more.
I really like the comic so far. the art style is pretty and unique compared to other comics like this one. The story so far is interesting and I look forward for more.
I really like the story so far. The humor in it is enough to put one of those dumb grins on your face. The art style is very beautiful and I really like the personality of the characters. I can't wait for more chapters.
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon