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From the start it has been a very interesting novel the grammar has been a little off also. However it has certainly improved immensely as the novel has advanced good job. As others have said that chapters could be a little longer and more released each day instead of the normal 2. By doing that alone I think you may find your novels hitting the top 100 list constantly . Thanks for the novel and keep up the great work cheers Charles Dale.