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I'm gonna keep the title not only because it's my first fanfic but also because I like it. For the Mc I do think that maybe the killing was a bit rushed but I do keep in mind that he said he would basically accept being a monster and the diablos are known for being unreasonably territorial. For the villagers their introspective was the in the Makings Of A Hero as it was the same village that needed aid though I could have picked through and detailed more.For final, I was about to type spoilers. but the title will only change when he is at the final evolution maybe.

Egyptians spoke some Hebrew, Egyptian Colloquial Arabic and masri/masry, I chose Hebrew because it was in Google translate. For the skin color everyone in Egyptian heroic spirit is either dark tan to black with the main exception being cleopatra. The same goes with the civilians as the movie Camelot portrays them as brown in skin color with the game. And yes I know that they were a mix of White, Brown and Black.

I don't know if I can fix that but I can try to put pov's. but don't hope too much

best I could find, as long as I don't step into anime.

also for the first point I shouldn't say but secret "plot"

yeah I get what you mean about typing it in two paragraphs. But I put the comparison in to kinda awe the mind but I didn't know it was annoying for it appearing so much. For the grammer I believe I've gotten better around chapter 20 but I'll also admit that I am missing some stuff, and the short chapters end now I've dedicated myself to posting normal length or almost normal length chapters. The fight scenes are definitely lackluster, I can say I'm not good at making fight scenes because I noticed that the mc is basically like a wyvern from mh because he does the same moves in almost every fight.

thank you for the review and I'll admit as well the prologue could have been better, but I have been getting better I think. Anyway thank you for telling me that the chapters are okay or good enough to read.

that is nitocris

Sadly it's staying

using the mh universe ranking HC means hard core which this diablos is.