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Why doesn't he want the throne himself? It'd make achieving things and his life 100x more easier than praying you don't end up with another mad king or even worse.
just because it's not commonly accepted doesn't mean it doesn't happen and mc knows how ruthless people in this world could be.
Why do you need her alive though? Why not take the eggs for yourself and have dragons of your own.
Unreal glazing
I mean..you could've just finished the mission and got out if you killed your target quickly instead of playing around. Smh
How does this make sense? People naturally grasp a language during long enough exposure to it. A baby doesn't need to be taught with dedication from parents on how to form simple sentences.
🤦♂️ Bro forgot he lives in a world where patricide is normal.
not all cliches are inherently bad. Some are needed for a story to rub more smoothly.
that's dumb cause then he'd be crippled under the burden of so many curses. Authorities aren't free gifts that you can just endlessly stack from what we've seen so far.
Tbh, in the defense of the overlords, He should atleast give credit to Qin Ye. You'd be a fool to walk into your enemy's home and further more be in the direct vicinity of powerful figures and not have any sort of treasure or plan to get out in case things go wrong.
Kinda like this mentality. No point in involving yourself in drama when your enemies are gonna die in the next 100 years while you still exist.
more than readable. i think it could use a little more excitement but it's not that bad. imo mc needs to mature a bit more before i can praise her but for now it's fine. the world building is fairly interesting. Author could up things up by being more descriptive and learning how set a scene better for the readers and inspire more emotions out of them. the author is still learning from what I can see so who knows the future holds. I will continue to read to see how this seed blossoms!
eww
That's a relief
I hope not.
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True, but there's also the fact that soldiers are typically trained to be able to preform well even when exhausted and can spend some days straight awake. Also, the fact that adreline is pumping through you while in the battlefield does wonder to forget your tired. There's also the fact there's a lot of resources to keep you awake and active. Of course, natural sleep is needed but just saying, not something one can casually do all the time in war.