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Grim999

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  • Grim999
    Grim9991mth
    Posted

    Hello, it would help me a lot if you could write me an opinion about what you think about this fanfiction. Bearing in mind that English is not my first language, please be forgiving of grammatical mistakes. because I write out of passion, I don't have a beta reader to correct them, and I have very little time. If you want to write a review, I would appreciate it if you could concentrate more on the story.[img=recommend]

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    Arthur Belmont-Prince and The Cursed Mirror: Harry Potter Fanfiction
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  • Grim999
    Grim9991mth
    Replied to GeneralColonoscopy

    I'm a fan of these books, lately I've tried as much as possible to get a little inspiration from the way Rick writes. an lil idea you could say.

    Ch 2 Chapter Two: The Red Letter
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  • Grim999
    Grim9998mth
    Replied to Elokla

    well Elias is older than Arthur...his birthdate is 31.12.

    Ch 4 Platform 9¾ (rewritten)
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  • Grim999
    Grim99910mth
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  • Grim999
    Grim99910mth
    Replied to _Arthas_

    it's because I'm writing from my phone... sorry if I made reading more difficult...[img=Speechless]

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  • Grim999
    Grim99910mth
    Commented

    maybe

    Ch 19 Hallowe'en - Part 3
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  • Grim999
    Grim99910mth
    Replied to TruthHurtsX1000

    ch. 18

    Ch 3 Diagon Alley (rewritten)
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  • Grim999
    Grim99911mth
    Posted

    I would appreciate an review, I honestly don't know if where the story is going is good or not...as I said, I want to become an author, and I am learning from this fiction, but I would appreciate it if you could tell me if I am doing well or not, and if not where should I improve... English is not my first language, it's my 4th, because of that I know there are some grammatical mistakes and I apologize...

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  • Grim999
    Grim99911mth
    Replied to Vishisht_Magan

    She is still harry's mother, and she does have some regrets.

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  • Grim999
    Grim99911mth
    Replied to Vishisht_Magan

    Thank you for saying this, it helps more than you think

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  • Grim999
    Grim99911mth
    Replied to Grim999

    Unfortunately, the story will be written more in the first person from Arthur's perspective, I might write from other perspectives later. You will learn that her story also went forward. not everything is the same, many did not die.

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  • Grim999
    Grim9991yr
    Commented

    Me alegra que te guste.[img=recommend]

    Ch 2 The Emerald Mansion (rewritten)
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  • Grim999
    Grim9991yr
    Posted

    My desire is to become an author... this is the reason why I write, and I would love to hear your opinions about this fiction. as you can tell, English is not my first language... but I try to make as few grammatical mistakes as possible...that's about all I wanted to tell you... I wish you a pleasant day ahead.

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  • Grim999
    Grim9991yr
    Commented

    I apologize, i write this on my phone 📱😅

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  • Grim999
    Grim9991yr
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    I want to believe that magic influences in a way the way magical beings think, I made Arthur's power be such that it works or is activated when he realizes that it exists, deep down he knew that it's something but he didn't know that until he received the letter, his magic works freely and out of the ordinary. and as for his way of being, Arthur is loyal and brave for his friends, intelligent and curious he wants to know more, but the one that characterizes him the most he is a person who adapts, a person who uses everything around him. He is a Slytherin. And as for his family and the unanswered questions, it is clear to him and it is not easy for him, but because of this he needs knowledge and knowledge to find out the desired answers. That's why he's in Hogwarts. And as for his mother, I can't tell you anything yet, because it would be too big a spoiler. believe nothing is what it seems.

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  • Grim999
    Grim9991yr
    Posted

    Chapters will be released slowly, because I want Arthur's story to make sense..this book will only be from Arthur's first year .... if you like it, leave a comment and I might add the suggested things if it fits the story I have in my head.

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  • Grim999
    Grim9991yr
    Replied to SagaLF11

    He is free only in name, because he desires to be paid, but both of them are quite special, you will see later in the story. May or not may be in this book

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  • Grim999
    Grim9991yr
    Replied to GuyTB

    Well, she is friends with her too xD I needed semone who hates the non-wizarding people, pansy will be used for the plot xD

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  • Grim999
    Grim9991yr
    Replied to GuyTB

    Well,English is not my first language, i apologize for that, i will try to take some of your points of course but dont expect something to be be perfect, after all this is my first fanfiction and secondly this is a fanfiction please remember that.

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  • Grim999
    Grim9991yr
    Replied to GuyTB

    I'll try, honestly, this is the first time I'm trying to write a fanfiction. Will do manny mistakes but glad to hear some feedback.

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