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BurritoTRO1yrCommentedWouldn't this cause infinite deflation?
Price: $50,000]- BurritoTRO1yrReplied to LuciFer_KarDam
she is 10.
And Finally as the Author I have the choice of alloting the permanent seats to Waifus of the Harem. - BurritoTRO1yrReplied to
more like appeal to hypocrisy
"*hick* Is it my fault…is it that important to have sex I just want to preserve myself when we got married assh*le" - BurritoTRO1yrReplied to
using Twitch emotes, yet calls someone maidenless
"*hick* Is it my fault…is it that important to have sex I just want to preserve myself when we got married assh*le" - BurritoTRO1yrCommentedCh 7 Chapter 7: Being a Tester and Faye’s Request
- BurritoTRO1yrReplied to Anna_Bananaz
94 now
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Malding
Anyway, that did the job! The stunt I did back then with Inasa's quirk? I can do that more effortlessly now! Though, I still get tired if I do it for a long time. Hmm... I should probably increase my stamina next... - BurritoTRO1yrCommented
Yami
[Objective Number 4- Invite a new member to the group chat] - BurritoTRO1yrCommented
Wait, that doesnt look right...
Height : 1.80 m / 5.9 feet - BurritoTRO1yrReplied to M7TH1C
its Fire Force Tamaki, not MHA Tamaki
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look at the aux. chapter its Tamaki from Fire Force not MHA
"Hehe." Could be the only thing heard from Tamaki at the moment as she is happy with how things turned out. - BurritoTRO1yrCommented"Your sword skills are very powerful." Mihawk walked over to Rifan's side with a sword in his hand, "Let me see, among us, who is the world's strongest swordsman."
- BurritoTRO1yrReplied to emoshoke_sebastine"Oh... Wait," That sparked his memories of just this morning, "General Zod, right? I thought he was some kind of terrible actor... Why did I think that?"
- BurritoTRO1yrCommented
and I...
Her cheeks, no, her entire face was flushed, her breathing was heavy, 'I... What are you doing to me? I am the one who... who lost...' - BurritoTRO2yrReplied to the_panda_manda
do i remember asking tho
''Ara~Ara~''' ''At such a young age you already look like a little ninja'' - BurritoTRO2yrCommented
177013 isnt even that bad, Euphoria (the hanime) Is much worse
(You're a lucky soul if you didn't get that reference. Just don't search 177013 on internet to read 'that thing' or you soul might be corrupted.) - BurritoTRO2yrCommented
satan Is sus
They had written "satan walks among us" in blood on the stained glass behind the altar. I would be lying if I said I was sad about their deaths. What I was sad about was the money. My father was a paper pusher, and my mom just did a small flower shop out of the house. - BurritoTRO2yrCommented"No, he just thinks he does. I want him to use that feeling and turn it into power. Anger is one of the best motivators to get stronger."
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- BurritoTRO2yrPosted
Overall a pretty good fanfic, there are a few problems with grammar, but nothing too bad. I would reccomend putting in more dialogue with the characters, because just reading the thoughts of the protagonist can become quite boring very quickly. Another minor problem i have with this fanfic is Matthew's reluctance to change the original plot of Harry Potter, because it Is already becoming very annoying. Overall would still reccomend though, i would rate it 4.6 to 4.7 out of 5.[img=recommend]