Master_Atlest
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Master_Atlest3dReplied to LostWizardgarou
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wait is it me?
A/N- I always had problems writing long texts and do my best to make at least 800 word each chapter. To me that already feels rather long when I write it but recently I saw a comment from an author on another book saying he did 2000 to 3000 every chapter and I was like 'Whaaaaaaat?!'. So please tell me, are my chapter too short and do you have any other suggestions that could improve my writing or book quality? - Master_Atlest5dReplied to Dominic_Zibuda
ok and, what do you have?, at least this person writes and gets assistance, what do you have?
Geralt, who usually had an air of dexterity and coolness, seemed contemplative, almost disturbed by his encounter with Ciri, a girl who had been destined for him by the law of surprise. He had found her in the forest, a dangerous and mystical place by the force of destiny, governed by the Dryads, fierce defenders of their domains. Ciri, despite her young age, had entered the forest alone, demonstrating an unusual courage for a child, and found him. - Master_Atlest6dReplied to Jonathan_Lam_2034
its not MTL
"How is it possible that I am here?" he murmured to himself now, his voice almost lost in the city's hustle and bustle. "How can this world, which I only knew in stories, be real?" Each step he took seemed to confirm more and more the reality of this world, a world he only knew as fiction. - Master_Atlest11dReplied to RighteousFilth
well how about you make something unique where the mc is a royal and actually stays one and enjoys being one instead of a bloody commoner, at this point its just a cliche
"We were just wondering if you've been doing okay lately. Most of your friends have gone off to the academy. You must be excited to join them," Eisha offered. - Master_Atlest11dCommented
ngl thought it said mosquitoes
During the first rift's emergence, humanity was ill-prepared, and after a fortnight, the spatial rupture birthed grotesque monstrosities that ravaged human life. - Master_Atlest11dCommented
so modern
"But dear, we've tried everywhere - the mall, rooftops, even bars! You said the same thing each time..." - Master_Atlest18dReplied to Doggos4Life
and now he can manipulators yours just fine too
[Bone Manipulation Technique] - Master_Atlest26dReplied to GEEGEE
hayfever disagrees with you
The only place Nathan managed to cool down was the forest. The beautiful trees and fresh air seemed to soothe his mind. - Master_Atlest28dReplied to robertibrown93xCh 17 First mission
- Master_Atlest28dReplied to YankeeDelta
kaldur, is trying to make friends
Kaldur's smile was understanding. "It's a wonder that inspires awe in everyone who steps aboard. Perhaps," he added, a hint of amusement in his voice, "later, when things are less hectic, I can give you a more detailed tour." - Master_Atlest28dReplied to Carnic_321
fixed
This paragraph has been deleted. - Master_Atlest28dReplied to hooves
yeah thank you, I appreciate the support, The timing has been a bit off at the moment, summer holiday is coming up so they are shoving as much work on us as soon as possible, Here is a peak legit for one day
(Ok, people are getting bored, and I can feel it, it's time for some action! I am changing the story, remember, this is a fanfiction so why should it follow the story? I am making things more logical and making it make sense, giving the people a boost in brain power.) - Master_Atlest28dReplied to Dieudonner_17
thank you, its not like i wrote this in a rush to show i havent dropped the fanfic, nor the fact i did this in between exams and course work
Batman's gaze swept across the young heroes, lingering for a moment on Asher. A flicker of something unreadable passed through the Dark Knight's eyes before he moved on. With a curt nod, Batman vanished in a blinding flash of light, the Zata tube booming shut behind him. - Master_Atlest28dReplied to
yeah sorry about that
This paragraph has been deleted. - Master_Atlest30dCommented"Pietro be careful, he is dangerous" The girl with red hair said, Pietro smiled with confidence "Wanda he may be fast but I'm Faster"
- Master_Atlest30dReplied to Mellow_Potato
ooooh bohoo, no one cares what you want
Would he accept his words, The Rumors have grown to large to try and deny it now, If he accepted his words will he even be able to explain why he was such a deadbeat even though he was 'Aware' of my existence. - Master_Atlest30dCommented
why did they make him 25 in identity then?
I am Only 15 afterall, Haven't had the chance to completely develop yet. - Master_Atlest30dCommented
oooh i thought he was a kid
You are 25 years old, and that will be your new identity. - Master_Atlest30dReplied to Kuvira123
are you stupid? most villains watch their parents die infront of them, and decide the world must pay, i think its fair that they are making counter measures
"Well I mean he can still be killed right" The Lady with Red Hair spoke, "No matter what kind of attack I used His body simply turned into lightning causing him absolutely zero Damage, But in theory if we Drastically speed up Rubber using a Circular Saw Machine, We could Harm him at least, So far it seems that only the rubber has been able to restrain him" She Said as she looked down at her Bandaged Hand.