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TiltedBoarr1yrReplied to nightwolf2007kkingdom is a part of the empire
The Captain of the ship is more than happy to have the Shining Darkness on board, the Phalanx Class Mecha are a good luck symbol to the entire Empire, and Colonel Black has agreed to the General's proposal to take his Cadets on the mission.- TiltedBoarr2yrCommented
ofc, no negative reactions, just "oh, i transmigrated" like no big deal
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here we go, from zero to hero xd
'I'm being a burden...' - TiltedBoarr2yrCommented
well, it's quite annoying to read "idiot brother" every time that fucking bitch is saying anything, it's so unnatural
"Idiot brother, I followed you and saw you meeting the blonde beauty. You look good together." While giggling, Althea revealed the reason for their strange smiles that even made them forget about the money he left for them. - TiltedBoarr2yrCommented
nice cringe here
"You. Don't talk about that thing! My mind is already occupied with doing better as an Energy Refiner. A boyfriend is still out of the question." - TiltedBoarr2yrCommented
where is truck-kun? almost every author uses that cliché tool
Dave had just finished college and was ready to make it big. To celebrate he went camping with a few close friends. Unfortunately, they didn't expect it to end the way it did. The group was attacked by a wild bear and Dave in a burst of unexpected courage tried to protect one of his friends that got caught. He succeeded in saving his friend, but at the cost of his own life as he was slowly mauled alive. Thankfully between the adrenaline and blood-loss the pain didn't last too long. - TiltedBoarr2yrReplied to KinGgate
Well, take a look on the other side. He started from the bottom. He was alone with the girls against the whole army, so I think there is quite a difference. I agree partly with what you're talking about, however, you are not entirely right.
"You cannot go directly to your enemies? What do you think I'm doing?" - TiltedBoarr2yrReplied to Mute
Well, I guess the author had to stop this OP ability somehow. Earning enough money would allow him to literally buy strength and further power-ups.
One reason was because the energy points supplied by spirit medicine could no longer fundamentally increase his strength anymore. - TiltedBoarr2yrReplied to TruckkunJr
- TiltedBoarr3yrReplied to Lentz_Dejean
Your memories and experience defines who you are. Imagine losing memories of your entire life and starting life anew. Even tough your personality might be the same, still, it's the experience defines how the personality is shaped in the long run, it's just the core of your being might be unaffected, that's all. This author is nuts, cuz he introduced this plot device and dropped this by the end of the freaking chapter. What is the freaking point of talking about transmigration? what is the freaking point of this entire chapter? None. This author has failed at the begining of this novel to write logically.
"Hell no," Damian instantly replied, now pledging to live his life to the best of his ability and didn't want to remember his terrible life. - TiltedBoarr3yrCommented
create* imagine refering to other person by name or word 'you' John, create two chairs for us or Doggie, eat that meat
This paragraph has been deleted. - TiltedBoarr3yrReplied to LordAnime
XDDD
[Description: Not even kings stand a chance. 350% to all out going attacks for 10 minutes. Cant be upgraded.] - TiltedBoarr3yrReplied to lightnovelguy
that's why it is called parry not block. While blocking u receive entire punch, usually with ur shield, but carry is about directing the attack sligtly off you, without receiving entire force, so it's quite logical. This logic is used in some of the mmo games
[Description: You can block 3 blade skills in a row without taking any damage.] - TiltedBoarr3yrReplied to TempestasUmbra
according to the character description, this man lived more than 60 years, so yea, imagine ur fking grandpa when he gets drunk and his choices. Furthermore he lived 40 or more years in the fking Tower, so yea, imagine again living in those conditions. Notice that we know little to nothing at this stage about our MC, tutorial was his priority cuz it was his starting point, so the better starting point, the better results in the long term, that's why he was so focused on the goal. Now he's out of the mission and is looking for some companions we can assume that his is taking it easy and he is giving himself some before he sets his next goal
...He was a little tipsy. - TiltedBoarr3yrReplied to Badz_Baddy
It's either orphan or main character with heavily sick (and usually in coma) mother/aunt/foster mother or whatever relative left
As school finished, and being an orphan who had always been living off what was provided by the government, and due to his low talent, Lex who became a young adult at 14, had no choice but to join the government. - TiltedBoarr3yrCommented
Once again me, I know I'm annoying but let's focus on that sentence. The girl took a step closer to the boy - this part is fine and tilted his head - who tilted the head? there is lack of indication that you are talking about the boy, and sentence points that is the girl tilting her head and began to speak closely - and here I don't know who began to speak closely to whom.
The girl took a step closer to the boy and tilted his head to face her and began to speak closely... - TiltedBoarr3yrCommented
sentence before, as he walks into the base, we have present tense, so why here, with building description is past tense? "was"
The inside of the base was average-looking as well. With only three counters on the corner, and tables and chairs on the other side. With only a few people minding their own business and seemingly not caring to others.