Hidaeki_Kago

Enjoyable at the beginning then the MC personality start to shift, plot twist from nowhere arrive, characters die (like a lot). It’s just not enjoyable past the 65 to 75 chapter.

TLDR: Don't invest time in this. Credit where credit is due, the writing, worldbuilding, characters, and their relationships are quite spectacular, with a depth rarely seen on Webnovel. However, the story, which was already dark, became darker quite fast, to the point that any kind of payoff is meaningless. To be fair, the novel is not finished, but I run on the hypothesis that it will end in the same fashion as "The Villain Wants To Live." Or there will be a bounce back with some way to revert the story to before everything got screwed up. Either way, it's not worth my time, and I wish I could get back the hours I already sunk into this.

Disclaimer: I've only read the first 31st (free) chapters. I don't mind it being cliche, but everything is bland. The writing is one of, if not, the main issue. I would suggest the author add more structure going forward because right now, it is a mess: the sentence structures and tenses are all over the place, author notes are added in the middle of the chapters (more on that later) and the narration is basic, at best. The pacing does not let you immerse yourself in the novel because the reader is simply flown from one point of interest to another with barely some background info on what is happening as a whole, and the rest is time skipped. Finally, the most infuriating thing about this novel are the author's notes in the middle of the chapters. Not even speaking about the 4th wall, the notes explaining what the few lines before implied are the worst, removing fluidity of an already tedious read.