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OvercookedChicken

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  • OvercookedChicken
    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to Peasant_1

    Just to make it clear the mc is a grown adult in the body of a child meanwhile Tsunade IS currently a child, would an adult even in the body of a child take another child seriously? Besides her canon adult counterpart does have an unruly and brash personality which is also explained in this chapter. Just wanted to make it more clear. Cheers!

    Hearing this Jin almost wants to cry seeing the brash and unreasonable canon Tsunade counterpart slowly manifesting in her. He almost wanted to ask where she was hiding her true nature before. Having no other choice if he doesn't want to escalate the small problem, he agrees with a heavy heart and answers through gritted teeth: "Okay you got me"
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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to Onxio

    Your right but nobody wants a clone for a Hokage as even Naruto in the canon series who spends most of his time inside the village doesn't use clones. Besides I explain later on that clone techniques still have limitations. Cheers mate!

    (Phew, tomorrow is the day that I can finally start my join the sannin plan. I know it sounds ridiculous but I need the political power it brings. Since if I remember correctly when Sarutobi dies the next Hokage candidates are all among the sannin. Of course, I won't become Hokage myself as it's 1, too much paperwork and 2 I need to be able to move without hindrance in order to achieve more of my plans later on. While being Hokage I could achieve most of my plans it also at the same time makes other plans impossible to do. Instead, il use the political power of the sannin to have my candidate become Hokage instead. Now I know what your thinking, how can I become one of the sannin you might ask. Well obviously I have to replace one of them and sorry Jiraya but you're going to have to switch with me and I have a very good reason for choosing Jiraya.)
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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to dadaoist

    You're just proving my point here, nothing more to say.

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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to dadaoist

    Never mind, there is no use talking to someone who has to be right no matter what.

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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to dadaoist

    You could say the same about yourself you know, like I mentioned before it was never mentioned how Minato truly found the Flying Thunder God Technique, You're just assuming that it was thanks to Sarutobi when it was never fully proven. Besides, the reason I said Sarutobi kept them at arm's length is that Orochimaru said so in his fight against him. he mentioned that Sarutobi never thought them any secret S-ranked Ninjutsu, that's why Orochimaru had to go so far as stealing them in order to learn any. So in the end all it comes down to is whether you can accept my version of events rather than yours. Still, if you find anything else then be sure to let me know. Cheers!

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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to OvercookedChicken

    And in the end, this is a fanfic so if I don't change things it won't be my vision of the series anymore, just another retelling of the canon series. Cheers and I hope you enjoy the series and keep telling me of my mistakes as that helps me be on track. Thanks and cheers mate!

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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to dadaoist

    That is still not very likely considering he keeps his own students at arms reach, he never truly taught the sannin any secret S-ranked ninjutsu as far as I remember so giving the student of a student that he doesn't know is unlikely. And like I said, he learned it as a kid but didn't master it until much later on with Kushinas help, and even in the 3rd Shinobi war, he was known for this very technique.

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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to oo99999

    I release around 1 chapter a day, but mostly 2 if I can.

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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to freezeZero

    There are already a few clues hidden here or there, but considering Jin's current situation he cannot learn any elemental jutsus until he reaches at least gennin class first so its not prevalent until much later on. What I can tell you is that he has in his training regime also worked on his elemental chakra nature as Naruto did with the leaves, it was a very slow process since he didn't have the Multi Shadow Clone until now, but when he learns proper elemental ninjutsu you will see that he will be at a much higher level in both learning them and using them because of his training.

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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to White_Clown

    Sorry if I explained poorly, the old archives room is meant for just that historical archives and unimportant old documents, Tobiramas jutsus being there is explained by them being first getting misplaced or lost and then forgotten about considering the state of the room, it was more of a huge pile of paperwork and scrolls and let me tell you good luck finding anything in that mess.

    (Nonetheless, whoever is in charge of the old archives room are either really reckless or just didn't know of the existence of these S-rank ninjutsu scrolls. It might be the former but I'm leaning rather more towards the latter as the room looked like it hasn't been used by anyone in a while and looked more like a dumpsite for old documents and historical records. Well, who am I to complain since I profited immensely from the whole ordeal.)
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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to dadaoist

    That makes no sense, why would the Hokage give a kid that isn't related to him in any way an S-ranked secret ninjutsu? Besides it was never truly known how Minato learned the Flying Thunder God Technique, just that he learned it as a child and then with the help of Kushina perfect it later on.

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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to Gabriel_Kust

    Well, that isn't always the case, the test to becoming a gennin is to summon 1 clone since it's to test whether you learned the jutsu or not, not how many clones you can summon. Besides the clone technique is a "lesser" or "weaker" version of the shadow clone technique. And like I mentioned before he is currently a grown adult in the body of a kid so his comprehension will be fast, you also have to remember even naruto as a kid learned the exact same jutsu almost instantly.

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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to dadaoist

    You are correct sir, was a mistake on my part, I've corrected it now. Cheers and thanks for letting me know.

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    OvercookedChicken2yr
    Replied to MightyOzy

    Dude, that's an amazing and very detailed summary of a very rigorous training method, good job. I've already had a few of these in mind I just haven't gotten around to showing it just yet in the story and if you don't mind il definitely use a few of your ideas that I never thought about. Cheers mate and thanks for reading.

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    OvercookedChicken2yr
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    Just to clarify, I did a poor job of giving an example here, Jin here is only giving an example of something he has read before and notices the similarities between them. I've read somewhere before that ki, qi and chakra are usually used interchangeably being mostly the same thing, the only difference being where the words themselves are being used, with qi being used most frequently in china, ki for japan and chakra for India. I'm not 100% sure but thats what ive read. Cheers!

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