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really good chapter is Korra gonna be the love interest or who? you should have him make a wing suit and he can use the steambending from the air to push him to keep in the air next you should have learn some form of martial art also once he get a high enough mastery over blood bending are you gonna have him be able to control the sword to fly like yadu from guardians of the Galaxy and also extend you should also have him practice throwing needles and ninja stars that he can make out of ice
did you not read the earlier chapter magic is slowly coming back to that world so it won't matter soon also since your gonna be bringing magic in the world you should bring in gates from another world to bring monster and other people like elves and ects and when he more powerful he can claim the thrown with the crown
for his next sword he should make a training/enlightenment sword that help speed up training he does with it around like say he used it while practicing a new sword technique and said technique would have took him 4 month to be able to use it battle but with the sword I would take a week at most and the enlightenment part would just help him come up with more ideas to use it or improve it all together also another use would be say was thinking of making something like a new sword or technique but couldn't come up with something with the sword it would help him come up with one faster
you should have him learn how to use runes and get runes tattoos on him and his pet when he put on his pets it should give them me speed power and endurance and if you can when you put on the runes on the animal it should slowly change there bloodline like making them bigger stronger and faster then it will pass down to the baby's they have then you have a new species of animals for your home and if your gonna do that then you should also find a lizard and make your own dragon
are we bout to get three sword style you can also remake some of zoro moves too since he so proficient in seal you should make sealing tattoo on that shape into sukuna tattoo that will be dope the affect that they should give when turn on should strengthen he's body to the limit that it can take or when in dire situation he can surpass that limit at a cost and if you can make it work with safe mode the second thing it should do is help help control a single element like it's a extension of it's body like you can control it to make element construct like animals or weapons like he's Gilgamesh or Magento or can make wings out of it like konena also why do you have him make a wingsuit then have him you a wind jutsu to just keep him in the air you can use any of these ideas I feel like it would help you
I can already feel him meeting his mom and her asking to come back with to the giant clan and try to be mother then and there but pls don't forgive like other mc does it makes no sense like going to the giant clan that reasonable because he should learn his roots but forgiving the woman is not it makes no sense at all and when you gonna have him pick up his pet spider also I think with aura he can help mutate his pet if he practice alot