EditorYakeru
Inconsolable, I walked across the empty square with my hands in my pockets. Further torments and slavery. Poof!
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EditorYakeru2yrReplied to Shade_ArjuunCallum
This chapter has been deleted.- EditorYakeru2yrCommentedCh 252 Pushing
- EditorYakeru2yrReplied to _oinkchan
Demon King becomes the strongesst being ever, hence why the Elves , Orcs and the little tech midgets- are on Earth as a last frontier.
I wasn't someone who wanted to bear the responsibility of saving the world. That responsibility weighed heavier than anyone could possibly imagine. - EditorYakeru2yrCommented
Maybe change it to futon? The japanese dont put beds or much furniture on tatami floors huhuhu!
Abruptly sitting up straight, I found my body drenched in sweat. Touching my body in a daze I noticed I was on top of a small bed with the bedsheets damp from my sweat. Looking at my hands I couldn't see any trace of the previous gruesome scene from when I was climbing down the rope. - EditorYakeru2yrCommented
Correction: “Khan **and** the other…” :)
This paragraph has been deleted. - EditorYakeru2yrCommentedCh 157 Ugly
- EditorYakeru2yrCommentedCh 149 Saved
- EditorYakeru2yrCommentedCh 147 Reunion
- EditorYakeru2yrCommentedCh 146 Deeper
- EditorYakeru2yrReplied to EveofchaosCh 145 Exploration
- EditorYakeru2yrCommented
I’ve been loving this story but if I had one flaw to point out; is that the past few dozen or so chapters seemed more romantically inclined than actual development with his power. Will at anytime soon Khan be on his martial arts grind again (just like the starting chapters?) Also, I loved the PTSD chapters you put out! They were deep and emotional!
Ch 145 Exploration - EditorYakeru2yrCommentedCh 132 Competent
- EditorYakeru3yrPosted
Hello, dear readers! Author Greed here. This is my newest work, ‘The Coming of Avarice!’. It’ll be updated 3+ times a week. This book is extremely dark, its not R-18 for no reason! So please, enjoy Jake Astaril’s journey in the world of magic! (Also make sure to leave some reviews, or comments! They help alot! ;).) *Shamelessly leaves himself a 5 star review* Huhuhu!
- EditorYakeru3yrPosted
Hello! I’ve been an avid reader of this book for a short while now. If you’re looking for a good review that will spell out the cons and pros of this novel, please keep reading. I havent gotten too far into the book, id say I’m in the middlenof it. First of all, I would like to give many thanks to the Author for the amazing story written, and I promise I dont have an agenda against you; that would be shameful of me huhuhu ;)! Pros; -Great world building. The story is set out extremely well, and it almost never gets boring. -Interesting system. It is cleanly detailed, with almost no holes through it. It’s more of a system, than a person which is a plus in mg book. -Hilarious MC with cold qualities. The MC is hilarious, and has made me laugh multiple times. ehm evolution seems painful.. hehe ;) -Multiple races. A variety in cleanly thoughtout races. Quite a large amount of them, most of which are new to be seen, created and made out. -Weak to Strong. Becomes powerful, and its cleanly designed to feel refreshing. As for harem, I don’t think so. Atleast not where I am. Cons; -A bit boring and slow in some parts. It had slow moments like all books. -MC seems to sometimes forget about becoming stronger. The MC’s main goal is strength, and yet sometimes he gets distracted from that. -Becomes more focused onto his lover, instead of himself. This is a personal opinion, I didnt like how the MC has almost forgotten his main goal. -Slight tad bit too much of romance. MC is too into his head about his lover. Everytime he looks at her he fauns over her, and slowly has become more centered around her. I dont mind this but it has become a bit too much for me. For example, most chapters consisting of her has her being teased, spanked, flirted with or just faunrd over. Anyhow this book is up to you read about. I prefer no harem. So author, please no harem! Thanks for reading, Author Greed!
- EditorYakeru3yrReplied to chastityqm
Ah, I see! Thanks!
"You're very welcome to be a good boy," she tells you, sweetly, her breasts pressing against the back of your head as she watches Fumiko. You're no longer at breastfeeding age, but her bosom is still incredibly full and frankly gorgeous. Your dad really picked out a looker. You never did learn his name: he's at work a lot, and while your mother speaks to him fairly frequently on the phone (a lot of financial things, she's not quite just a housewife), she always calls him pet names like Darling. Fumiko calls him "Papa," and his employees only refer to him as Kusakabe-sama. - EditorYakeru3yrCommented
So, he did know his name because his employees refer to him as Kusakabe-sama?
"You're very welcome to be a good boy," she tells you, sweetly, her breasts pressing against the back of your head as she watches Fumiko. You're no longer at breastfeeding age, but her bosom is still incredibly full and frankly gorgeous. Your dad really picked out a looker. You never did learn his name: he's at work a lot, and while your mother speaks to him fairly frequently on the phone (a lot of financial things, she's not quite just a housewife), she always calls him pet names like Darling. Fumiko calls him "Papa," and his employees only refer to him as Kusakabe-sama. - EditorYakeru3yrReplied to The_F00LCh 46 Chapter 46 – [Day 17] – “Cute” (Fair Warning: Explicit 18+)