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Yeah... while Ouranos sees it as fitting humiliation, the rest will see it as a slap on the wrist, a more violent version of a spanking in the face of what Maxim's done. Should've, painfully, removed a testicle, maybe both. It would have been more of a punishment considering Maxim's personality.
I shall blot out the sun! Hail of a thousand blights!
This would have been golden with another chapter or 2
I'm super lost and it seems like the story wasn't going anywhere for the longest time. Now, the enemy can conveniently destroy things he created despite him no-selling god-tier beings of multiple Worlds at this point. Even the Worlds are afraid of him now... and some random person isn't? If they can somehow match Leo's power or ability, doesn't that mean most of the chat group is useless? Also, his cliché system crash to "allow plot to happen" should have stopped being a thing when he became an omnipotent inhuman creature. Instead of stopping, it's been used as a poorly timed gag to increase word count and excuse enemy action. ...I think I'm out. In the beginning, this story was a funny story with an amusing plot and shitpost styled humor, but it changed. Somewhere around his sudden bid to get Lucifer's power and his decision to rewrite his place in existence, the story became pure shitpost and the facade of a plot gave up on being such. Now, the author is trying to introduce a new plotline but it ignores the MC's absurd abilities by making goofy moment occur. There's also the fact the Worlds are powerful until they are not.
Upon reflection, it is a death sentence. Shirou was said to have only avoided by crippled or killed via his created circuits because of Avalon. Our boy would die the very first time his divided his circuits amongst his clones.
I was worried he would flounder for a while longer, but he grabbed his issues and moved forward, healing as he continued to live his life. He wound up happier for it and didn't ruin his future prospects by attempting some cartoonish revenge plan. I enjoyed this quite a bit. It was a breath of fresh air.
I remember that novel. The MC was so dense, it really ticked me off
...I don't believe you know how the hocrux was made that night...
I hope you realize Seastone restraints are perfect for DF user who want to undergo Haki and physical training, right? The drain on a DF user makes them develop better stamina and the disconnect from their fruit allows their bodies to grow stronger without the DF interfering with their gains.
So... he became Ace in the Level 6 Cell, right? So, how would the "no devil fruit" thing have even worked since Ace ate his fruit already? It would have been unbelievably odd and a dead giveaway if Firefist Ace no long had a Fire Logia... just saying I'm glad you didn't go that route.