Dovendyr_

Didn't Ask

I found the story to be creative and overall the writing quality was perfect. I didn't find that many grammar mistakes. I found that the way you built the character development in the novel to be a lot more realistic that other novels where out of nowhere the mc become op or fought like a veteran. Though that doesn't mean the story is slow the pace of the story in my opinion was perfect and how you kept suspense at certain parts of the novel was perfect overall I think this is one of the best Naruto fanfictions you can find. Good job author-san!!!