more effective in real combat? is this a joke or something? narutos and hinatas styles are propably much more focused on real combat than any martial art that our world has created and they have been tested on wars with other people capable of superhuman feats... what u said here just makes zero sense but sure go ahead.

Or it could just be a feline monster like a tiger? what then? its worse than the direwolf by a landslide.

OOOOOOOOUUUHHHHHHH ITS EEEERREEEEENN YEEEAAAGGGGGGEEEERRRRRR.

I find it so wierd that people want to have water at their bedside? like bro just get out of bed and go get it.

How much do i got?

sasuke in boruto anyone? LOL

Wanted to ask if you have a p@treon or something where i can read chapters in advance. Also great fanfiction, I am really enjoying it as of right now. -Lots of Love

LETS GOOO MA MAN GETTING THAT MC STATUS!!!!

Simply an amaizing work of art.Reminds me of shadow slave and thats a hard thing to do.

I am entitled to my own opinion but i also think that readers should know what theyr getting into and so ill give my prespective of it. If you like edgy, omg i hate this for absolutley no reason and so im gonna kill everyone on my way suddenly even though i have never killed in my past life, then this story is for you. If you dont like someone getting summoned to the world of naruto which he hates for no reason at all and just beacuse of that wants to kill everyone and cause mass genocide just to get out then this isnt for you. I didnt lie a single time while writting this review. This is an objective standpoint and i even gave you an average rating not high and not low. Peace~

The concept for the story is interesting but sadly the author doesnt have the ability to carry it out and express it through writing, also he/she doesnt seem to care about the novel as much as i have seen people correcting his grammar mistakes and telling him/her how to fix it but he/she just doesn't seem to care.overall the writing quality is bad.The more you read through it, the more boring the story becomes so the story development is also bad.Characters are basiclly one dimensional and quite honestly feel like they just exist for the sole purpose of giving the mc some *swag* or make him look *cool*.updating stability seemed average.As we all know the world is a copy of fairy tail but he does add some little things so ill consider it average.With all that considered i give this a 2.4 rating out of 5.recommandation: dont waste your time.

young man really?? he's 13 ffs

Does the grammar improve later? I hope so.

would of been a cool vampire

left?? nah the right is much more holy

Oh no, you were not rude in any way as it's a reader's right to like or dislike a part or an entire story. I just wanted to explain what the future would entail. Thanks for the info, I really appreciate readers that tell me their thoughts on how the story feels to them.

While it is true that it can be considered a copy but is it really when so many fanfictions already do it? I've seen it done a lot and just decided to add it as it made the chapter a little different and I honestly still think it's funny. I know that you think the work is unoriginal and to this point, I totally agree with you however at the moment I'm planning to create some semblance of a relationship between the characters and trying to get the plot out of the way as fast as possible. I'll be creating a whole new story after the plot is over, but I can understand that people can't wait that long, and if you can't then I can only say thanks for reading up to this point.

u will get the extra chapter so these 2 or 3 days, one day will be double upload

i did but i messed one up and ended having to discard the draft since i wasnt pleased with they way it went, reading some more twilight fanfic rn so that i can come up with a better one

Its fixed on later chapters and the earlier chapters will be edited and fixed this weekend