Redgamer120
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if a rut was a status effect he could find items that empower him and might have synergy with some status effects and/or pals
It sounds like you either have a good chapter planned or several with those ideas alone. Does the dungeon get caught and causes chaos in the bad guys camp with words alone, get rescued by the good humans to meet a merchant, and suddenly, his pal army/family will show up to save him. it would be funny and more than one chapter, I think.
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For your breedable characters, I would look into pokemon with human mixing. Not to be a furry, but some pokemon are good for breeding, defending, and any other use the Mc might need.
not a mini gun but looks like a maxim or 30 cal machine gun
what is this from because if it is from a ff that mixes star wars and halo with such good images I would read it
good luck making it better, I liked it the way it was, not professional but understandable and interesting to read