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Mister_santana

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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1mth
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    Finally, a new fanfic of Martial World in these parts, this refreshes my spirit. The few that exist haven't gone very far, I hope the fellow daoist continues and doesn't perish on this journey.

    Ch 4 004-First meeting
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1mth
    Commented

    Nice

    Ch 20 Writing a New Fanfic please check it out.
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1mth
    Commented

    So far, everything is going very well. I'm eagerly anticipating MC's development as he ages, even though mentally he's 24. I hope this doesn't lead to him gaining levels of authority too quickly, as if he were 10 or 11, making decisions that would typically be unlikely for someone his age. For instance, creating a secret organization sounds quite unrealistic to me, as I often see in some works where the MC, still a child, manages to convince others to do so. If you prefer a more realistic development without taking creative liberties, then perhaps avoiding such scenarios would be beneficial. In my opinion, And as for how you're doing, it's very good.

    Ch 5 Siles Chapter 5
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to timeawayfromstress

    I'm having some problems with studies and I can't write much, but I'll still continue the fanfic, maybe today I'll post another chapter.

    Ch 27 Eternal Demon Abyss
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Commented

    THX

    Ch 6 Genius
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to Leo_Bassist

    I already decided to kill Lin Ming on the demon continent.

    Ch 21 King's Cage
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Posted

    Have some idea about my story? Comment it and let me known. .................. .................. ................. ................ ............... ........

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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to LIVT

    I think about ten chapters or less for Lin ming to appear, about killing Lin ming I'm still in doubt whether to kill him in the holy demon continent or in the divine realm

    Ch 18 fire concept
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to Leo_Bassist

    are you referring to grandmist Spirit bead which is one of the three divine tools or Demon bead which is just a replica with stored energy?

    Ch 17 Revolving core (2)
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to Leo_Bassist

    It will take a while for me to post the next chapter, I'm busy at the moment, but tomorrow I'll post a new chapter.

    Ch 15 second floor
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to LazyMartialSage

    I'm also thinking of him merging the three source laws (spirit source qi, Genesis qi and grandmist qi) into a single transcendent divine might so that he can sublime himself using these three laws.

    this was the result of his attempt to create his unique cultivation method which unfortunately failed.
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to liutianlong

    yea, I'm thinking that Luo Meng creates a transcendent divine might divided into two parts, one concentrated in pure destructive power (laws of annihilation, space, death...) and another with powers related to the Law of life.

    this was the result of his attempt to create his unique cultivation method which unfortunately failed.
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to VenerableDemon

    he doesn't know the original MC, and the Original MC will show up later

    Ch 7 The Great Essence Devouring Art
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to Leo_Bassist

    he will absorb the bloodlines of the fey, goliath, feral, and human races to improve his talent before recultivating.

    Ch 7 The Great Essence Devouring Art
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to Justin7Lucifuge69

    thanks for the comment, i'm trying to improve the story every day, this is my first time writing a fanfic, about the MC's final fate i consider that he will really be a villain, i think the things he will do will not be something what an anti-hero would do.

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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to Priest_Yuri

    don't worry that size is just a compressed shape due to the blood tyrant's body, in combat he will return to his natural size, and he will grow much more, he is only 13 years old.

    Luo Meng analyzed his new body, his body had drastically decreased in size, what was once a towering 3 meters was now just 1.80 meters, his hair turned even redder, his pupils were constantly emitting terrifying killing intent.
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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to Mister_santana

    and Lou Meng is not the guy who will chase beauties

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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to Mister_santana

    he will kill anything that stands in the way of his goals.

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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to FoodReviewSnake

    he will be quite ruthless towards his goals, he would not mind betraying the forces he will eventually belong to for his own benefit.

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  • Mister_santana
    Mister_santana1yr
    Replied to FoodReviewSnake

    I'm planning on turning him into a real villain later on.

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