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mchicken_34962yrReplied to Goatless_Pillowto be fair, the guy was running on a completely empty stomach and hadn't even drank a single drop of water
Galloping was the last thing I heard before falling into a deep slumber.- mchicken_34962yrReplied to bluS24
i know for a fact that there are instances of monsters living outside of the dungeon as seen with how bells grandpa "died" but it really isn't expanded on so it's hard to say what happens
Its head landed on the ground and rolled away while streams of blood spurted from the base of its neck. The rest of the creature's body hit the ground with a thump and dissolved, leaving only a tiny crystal in its wake. - mchicken_34962yrReplied to Classic_BalrogCh 9 Chapter 9: Imitation
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ur right, how could I forget such an important thing?
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it still has limits
Nevertheless, I continued casting pyromancy arts. Whips of raging inferno swept through their numbers, leaving them in an immobile state. Even the man who I had helped stopped and stared at me, eyes sparkling with awe. - mchicken_34962yrReplied to ProcrastinatorGuyCh 4 Chapter 4: Carriage to Orario
- mchicken_34962yrCommentedCh 17 Breakdown (part 1) V2
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should have been detroit
"How would you know!? Haven't you seen the video!? The fucker just destroyed Toronto and killed Mega Woman!" - mchicken_34962yrCommented
he should play jazz to set her off
"You've become sloppy. Your fingers are rigid, the flow is terrible, and the sound, oh my ears, the sound. It's like the chords have been substituted by arpeggios." - mchicken_34962yrReplied to ScarletBloodMoon
i was thinking more along the lines of "strength in numbers"
"I'm sorry, but well, i think I want to travel alone." - mchicken_34962yrCommented
personally, I am a shrigma
'Oh, shit. And to think that the art director at Dynamoth thought he was an alpha male. He never saw one in his life, but I would definitely like to introduce him to Proctius,' he thought wickedly. Guys like the art director who talked about the 'betas' with contempt, as if he were a great wavemaker... pff. - mchicken_34962yrReplied to Worn_out_by
i guess its exhilarating when you dont know how to swim and u start drowning so a life guard saves u and so ur happy u survived?
It was after I was swimming in a pool, the same feeling I would normally get after getting out of a pool, it was exhilarating. - mchicken_34962yrCommented
jesus how old is this novel? i played pvz when I was 7 which was 10 years ago
Zhao Yanzi started to play the most popular game lately "Plants Vs. Zombies." She focused on continuing her last level as she had decided to ignore Hao Ren. (This is an older book as you can tell from the game.) - mchicken_34962yrCommentedCh 31 Team Finals
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i feel like this story has just turned into an endless cycle of boring SMUT.
(A/N: Did Nobu grow a brain in the last ten chapters...?) - mchicken_34962yrCommentedCh 1 Reincarnated and Deaths
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ahh yes, a single atom layer of graphite
The reason Quinn wanted to proceed with layered hexagon layers was not that bees used it in beehives. But, because it was the structure of the strongest material known to man, Graphene. He wanted to emulate Graphene's structure and make an excellent base for his defenses. - mchicken_34962yrPosted
I like the way you moulded the Terraria into being its own unique world. With that being said, the writing quality is quite iffy at times with a few glaring issues such as forgetting to capitalise i's but the story is quite interesting. I hope you keep improving your writing so you can develop your story.
- mchicken_34962yrCommentedCh 9 Life continues