Sorry, what "shameless promoting"? I just said "read my stuff if you want". I see nothing "shameless".

Yes, it is coming out hopefully by tomorrow. Sorry for the delay! And thank you for reading and giving feedback!

Drippy indeed!

Thanks for the review and all the GIFs! MJH

Hey, thanks. Yep, I am aware that it can be a bit disorientating. Please keep reading, and thanks so much for the response! M. J. Holmgren

Saw your comment on my forum post now, I think you commented on it in November last year. Sorry about that, I totally missed it. Anyway - not too familiar with this universe. I think you write well, but writing in present tense really throws me off, sorry. An example is " ... Yosari gets up and prepares ... " vs. "Yosari got up and prepared" runs better for me (and many others, I think). Do come and read my stuff if you want. M. J. Holmgren

No romance thus far in this story, haha. I needed a change to the title. Yeah, trying to write when I can. I am excited for where this story will go next! Thanks for the support. MJH

Repetetive "barren" used twice. But good

Thank you! Just started out, working on the 2nd chapter aws. Will probably make adjustments along the way, but thank you so much! MJH