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Yeeeeeessssss finally
|Congratulations! You get (Haki)!| - Daoist5RvI4q5hPosted
Honestly it’s a entertaining read but it should show more of what the system contributes to the mc and the village because if not you might as well say it’s not a system fanfic. Also I think you should show more of what the mc battle prowes or what abilities he has and just have him more In the story since he’s the mc since it kind feel like he’s a side character
- Daoist5RvI4q5dCommentedCh 9 Curse technique reveal {9}
- Daoist5RvI4q5dCommentedCh 1 Keitaro (1)
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He should get ranmaru dojutsu
This paragraph has been deleted. - Daoist5RvI4q7dCommentedCh 60 Important information.
- Daoist5RvI4q10dCommentedCh 15 Chapter 15: Ryujiro vs Itachi
- Daoist5RvI4q12dCommentedCh -2 BRIEF INTRO(please read)
- Daoist5RvI4q22dCommentedCh 17 Biwa Juzo: The Wind Is Blowing Hard
- Daoist5RvI4q22dCommentedCh 11 Chapter 11: This is not the Style of the Whitebeard Pirates
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Facts because even in the beginning he talk about restoring his clan and that’s impossible with one kid that’s a girl
Although it's ironic that, in the end, the couple only had one daughter. One would think it's because Sasuke is traveling or something, but I always believed he also had trouble in the bedroom or with Sakura's insistence; it's impossible that they had only one child, especially under the need to revive a clan. - Daoist5RvI4q23dCommentedCh 66 Explosions
- Daoist5RvI4q25dCommentedCh 78 Chapter 78 Sudden Sickness
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- Daoist5RvI4q1mthReplied to FanficMortal
- Daoist5RvI4q1mthCommentedCh 47 Chapter 47: The Blade to be Drawn